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短文改错I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited to the XinHua News Agency last year. I chose

英语试题 08-29
短文改错 ( 共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分 )
   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited to the XinHua News Agency last year. I chose as my career based on the following reason. First, it is this job which can get me exposing to new things every day. Second, working as a journalist can help realize your dream of being a hero by fighting against evil or spreading justice.
To achieve this goal, I plan to apply to the Communication University of China, that major, Journalism, has been ranked the first for many years across the whole country. After getting my Bachelor Degree, I would continue my study in a world-famous university to broaden horizons.

答案
I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited to(to去掉) the XinHua News Agency last year. I chose加it as my career based on the following reason(改为reasons). First, it is this job which(改为that) can get me exposing(改为exposed) to new things every day. Second, working as a journalist can help realize your(改为my) dream of being a hero by fighting against evil or(改为and) spreading justice.
To achieve this goal, I plan to apply to(改为for) the Communication University of China, that(改为whose) major, Journalism, has been ranked the first for many years across the whole country. After getting my Bachelor Degree, I would (改为will)continue my study in a world-famous university to broaden horizons.
 
 
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