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书面表达 假如你的偶像是宋茜,下表为她的个人信息,请你根据表格内容写一篇短文,向大家介绍她

英语作文范文 02-14
书面表达
假如你的偶像是宋茜,下表为她的个人信息,请你根据表格内容写一篇短文,向大家介绍她。
姓名 宋茜(Victoria Song) 喜爱的食物 水果、胡萝卜和西红柿
职业 歌手、演员 喜爱的颜色 白色
出生日期 1987年2月3日 学生时喜爱的学科  英语和艺术
喜爱的运动 网球和乒乓球 不喜爱的学科 科学
不喜爱的运动 篮球 喜爱的理由 ......
 要求:(1)文章必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)必须补充至少一个喜爱的理由;
(3)词数:70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. This beautiful girl is Victoria Song. She is my favorite singer and actress.
[例文]
Hello, everyone. This beautiful girl is Victoria Song. She is my favorite singer and actress.
She was born on February 3rd, 1987. She likes playing tennis and ping-pong and she often plays tennis with her friends after work. But she doesn’t like basketball because she thinks it’s difficult and boring. Victoria likes eating fruit, carrots and tomatoes very much. She thinks they are healthy food. Her favorite subjects are English and art. They are easy and interesting for her. She doesn’t like science very much.
I like her very much because she is very beautiful and hard working.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:本题是材料作文,要根据题目所给的关于宋茜的信息,完成一篇对宋茜进行介绍的文章。除开所给要点之外,还应适当进行拓展。由于是介绍人的文章,时态应用一般现在时。
2.例文点评:例文分为三段式,首段为原题已有开头,起引出话题的作用。第二段按照题目所给要点详细介绍了偶像宋茜的一些个人信息,最后一段简单阐述了喜欢她的原因并结尾。例文层次分明,条理清晰,叙述流畅地向读者详细介绍了关于偶像宋茜的基本个人信息以及喜好,是一篇合格的范文
3.高分亮点:
短语:after work,very much,hard working。
句型:
1. She likes playing tennis and ping-pong.
2. But she doesn’t like basketball because she thinks it’s difficult and boring.
3. She thinks they are healthy food.
 
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