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你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛,你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述,请根据提示,以“Kindness is a gift”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。

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你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛,你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述,请根据提示,以“Kindness is a gift”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
 

 

要求: 1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括提示中所有信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kindness is a gift
Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【例文】Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?
When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.
I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛,你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述,请根据提示,以“Kindness is a gift”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。内容要求中指出了写作要点,动笔前一定要认真阅读内容要点,根据内容要点组织材料,确定句子人称,时态等问题。可以先把各要点用句子表达出来,然后再组合成文。写作中注意语意通顺,符合逻辑关系,为了使短文更显得有逻辑性,在列举自己的优势时,可以适当使用序数词。举出的例子要有说服力,想象合理并适当发挥,不能遗漏要点。注意采用一些习惯的句式,固定短语,以使自己的演讲稿更有文采。写完后多读几遍,适当修改。
【点睛】这是一篇非常优秀的文章,作者用到了一些好的句型:it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.;If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson.这些给文章增色不少。

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