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Peter's Changes
根据表格中的内容, 以“Peter's Changes”为题，谈论Peter三年来的变化，并写出他提高英语水平的三个方法。
要求: (1)短文须包含所有的提示词，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名；
(3)词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Peter's Changes
It seems that Peter has changed a lot. He used to ____________________________________
【范文】 It seems that Peter has changed a lot. He used to be a shy and quiet boy in a primary school. But now he is outgoing and friendly. He was weak in English in the past especially in spoken English. So he was afraid to answer the teachers' questions during English classes.
After he entered the middle school, something changed. He learned many interesting English stories and his English teacher was patient to help him. He studied hard in class and practiced English by watching English films and listening to English songs in his free time. Little by little he found it more and more interesting to learn English. He could even talk with his classmates in English. Now he often gets high grades in English and he has confidence to do it better in the future.
【解析】
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Peter's Changes”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用两段式；时态综合运用一般现在时、一般过去时以及现在完成时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中。
高分亮点：
短语：used to do；be afraid to do；be patient to；little by little等。
句型：It seems that Peter has changed a lot. 使用了it作形式主语的固定句型。
Little by little he found it more and more interesting to learn English. 使用了形容词比较级。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
Peter's Changes
| 3 years ago shy, quiet be weak in English |
Now outgoing, friendly be good at English; have many good ways to learn English, for example… |
要求: (1)短文须包含所有的提示词，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名；
(3)词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Peter's Changes
It seems that Peter has changed a lot. He used to ____________________________________
【范文】 It seems that Peter has changed a lot. He used to be a shy and quiet boy in a primary school. But now he is outgoing and friendly. He was weak in English in the past especially in spoken English. So he was afraid to answer the teachers' questions during English classes.
After he entered the middle school, something changed. He learned many interesting English stories and his English teacher was patient to help him. He studied hard in class and practiced English by watching English films and listening to English songs in his free time. Little by little he found it more and more interesting to learn English. He could even talk with his classmates in English. Now he often gets high grades in English and he has confidence to do it better in the future.
【解析】
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Peter's Changes”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用两段式；时态综合运用一般现在时、一般过去时以及现在完成时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中。
高分亮点：
短语：used to do；be afraid to do；be patient to；little by little等。
句型：It seems that Peter has changed a lot. 使用了it作形式主语的固定句型。
Little by little he found it more and more interesting to learn English. 使用了形容词比较级。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
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