书面表达
假如你是李华。本周末你校要组织学生参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷（porcelain）展览，你想邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教Daniel一同参观。请给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.展览的内容；
3.时间、地点。
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【范文】Dear Daniel,
Students in our school will go to the Chinese Porcelain Exhibition held in the City Museum this weekend. Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
It is a great chance for you to enjoy the most beautiful works of porcelain art. Some of them were made by gifted craftsmen from hundreds of years ago. You can be very lucky to see the delicate object used by the former kings. The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people. Of course, you can also listen to the explanation by scanning QR code beside each exhibit.
All students are supposed to gather at the front gate of the City Museum at 9 a.m. on Saturday. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教Daniel一同参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷（porcelain）展览。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.发出邀请；
2.展览的内容；
3.时间、地点。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted to; grateful; be supposed to do; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
You can be very lucky to see the delicate object used by the former kings.
The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people.
All students are supposed to gather at the front gate of the City Museum at 9 a.m. on Saturday.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句，如The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people.这句话from which引导非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假如你是李华。本周末你校要组织学生参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷（porcelain）展览，你想邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教Daniel一同参观。请给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.展览的内容；
3.时间、地点。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】Dear Daniel,
Students in our school will go to the Chinese Porcelain Exhibition held in the City Museum this weekend. Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
It is a great chance for you to enjoy the most beautiful works of porcelain art. Some of them were made by gifted craftsmen from hundreds of years ago. You can be very lucky to see the delicate object used by the former kings. The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people. Of course, you can also listen to the explanation by scanning QR code beside each exhibit.
All students are supposed to gather at the front gate of the City Museum at 9 a.m. on Saturday. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教Daniel一同参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷（porcelain）展览。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.发出邀请；
2.展览的内容；
3.时间、地点。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted to; grateful; be supposed to do; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
You can be very lucky to see the delicate object used by the former kings.
The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people.
All students are supposed to gather at the front gate of the City Museum at 9 a.m. on Saturday.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句，如The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people.这句话from which引导非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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