写作 (共两节，满分40分)
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John非常关心你，来信询问你在这个“史上最长”的寒假中，除了学习之外，还做了什么有意义的事情或学会了什么新技能，希望你能分享一下。请你结合自己防疫期间的实际情况给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 简单介绍这件事情或技能及其意义。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】Dear John,
I’m grateful for your concern. As for how to make the lengthy holiday meaningful. I’m writing to share my cooking story with you.
The deadly COVID-19 made me increasingly bored with the indoor life and stressful study. Fortunately, under the guidance of videos, I managed to make Chinese burgers. Awkward as I was, my family were on top of the world when feasting on the delicious burgers. Though faced with the stressful college entrance exam, I am cheerful every day, for cooking adds color to our family life. I do wish to treat you to my dishes in China.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，告知朋友你在这个“史上最长”的寒假中除了学习之外，还做了什么有意义的事情或学会了什么新技能。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
要求：1. 表达感谢
2. 简单介绍这件事情或技能及其意义。
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
be grateful for; as for; make…meaningful; share…with; bored with the indoor life; under the guidance of; managed to; Awkward as I was; on top of the world; treat you to my dishes
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m grateful for your concern.
2. As for how to make the lengthy holiday meaningful. I’m writing to share my cooking story with you.
3. The deadly COVID-19 made me increasingly bored with the indoor life and stressful study
4. Fortunately, under the guidance of videos, I managed to make Chinese burgers.
5. Awkward as I was, my family were on top of the world when feasting on the delicious burgers.
6. Though faced with the stressful college entrance exam, I am cheerful every day, for cooking adds color to our family life.
7. I do wish to treat you to my dishes in China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2. 表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3. 表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, But, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,While others…, As for, So…that…
4. 表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了倒装句，如：Awkward as I was, my family were on top of the world when feasting on the delicious burgers.这句话中as引导的让步状语从句使用了倒装。使用了一些固定词组，如be grateful for; as for; make…meaningful; share…with; bored with the indoor life; under the guidance of; managed to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John非常关心你，来信询问你在这个“史上最长”的寒假中，除了学习之外，还做了什么有意义的事情或学会了什么新技能，希望你能分享一下。请你结合自己防疫期间的实际情况给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 简单介绍这件事情或技能及其意义。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________
【范文】Dear John,
I’m grateful for your concern. As for how to make the lengthy holiday meaningful. I’m writing to share my cooking story with you.
The deadly COVID-19 made me increasingly bored with the indoor life and stressful study. Fortunately, under the guidance of videos, I managed to make Chinese burgers. Awkward as I was, my family were on top of the world when feasting on the delicious burgers. Though faced with the stressful college entrance exam, I am cheerful every day, for cooking adds color to our family life. I do wish to treat you to my dishes in China.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，告知朋友你在这个“史上最长”的寒假中除了学习之外，还做了什么有意义的事情或学会了什么新技能。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
要求：1. 表达感谢
2. 简单介绍这件事情或技能及其意义。
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
be grateful for; as for; make…meaningful; share…with; bored with the indoor life; under the guidance of; managed to; Awkward as I was; on top of the world; treat you to my dishes
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m grateful for your concern.
2. As for how to make the lengthy holiday meaningful. I’m writing to share my cooking story with you.
3. The deadly COVID-19 made me increasingly bored with the indoor life and stressful study
4. Fortunately, under the guidance of videos, I managed to make Chinese burgers.
5. Awkward as I was, my family were on top of the world when feasting on the delicious burgers.
6. Though faced with the stressful college entrance exam, I am cheerful every day, for cooking adds color to our family life.
7. I do wish to treat you to my dishes in China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2. 表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3. 表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, But, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,While others…, As for, So…that…
4. 表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了倒装句，如：Awkward as I was, my family were on top of the world when feasting on the delicious burgers.这句话中as引导的让步状语从句使用了倒装。使用了一些固定词组，如be grateful for; as for; make…meaningful; share…with; bored with the indoor life; under the guidance of; managed to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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