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书面表达 提示: 英国作家萨克雷说:“播种习惯收获性格,播种性格收获命运”。

英语作文范文 04-01
书面表达
提示:
英国作家萨克雷说:“播种习惯收获性格,播种性格收获命运”。在生活中,好习惯伴随你成长。请你以“Good habits make me       ”为题,如:better, happy, healthy, stronger……用英语写一篇短文。
要求:
1.补全题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2.语言流畅、语意通顺、连贯、书写规范、卷面整洁。
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4.书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
【例文】
Good habits make me better
Good habits and good health are twins. Good habits can make people health. For example, getting enough sleep, having breakfast, and doing exercise regularly are all good habits. But some bad habits make people feel bad.
I had such an experience. In the past I often went to bed very late at night. So I felt very tired and sleepy the next day. I couldn’t learn well. So my mother ordered me to go to bed before 10 o’clock. And little by Little, I have formed this habit. Now I feel much better and I can learn well.
From my experience, I know having a good habit is very important and I’m going to form more good habits. I believe I will certainly have a good health.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作,写作时应围绕“好习惯使我      ”展开,填在横线上的应该是积极正面的词。第一段提出论点,第二段举例子论证观点,第三段强化中心论点并总结。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式,第一段鲜明地提出观点:好习惯能使人健康。接着结合自身经历运用反例去论证观点,最后一段强化观点:拥有好习惯非常重要。论点清晰,层次分明,结合自身经历来叙述,更加具有说服力。
3.高分亮点:
短语:go to bed late,order sb. to do sth.,form habit,little by little。
句型:I know having a good habit is very important and I’m going to form more good habits. 动名词做主语,宾语从句,be going to句型。
 
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