书面表达（满分 25 分）
假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter来信咨询如何把汉语学好。请你根据以下提示给他写一封建议信：（1）参加中文学习班；
（2）看中文书刊、电视；
（3）学唱中文歌曲；
（4）交中国朋友。
要求：
1. 词数不少于50；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.字迹工整；
4.电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try writing to me in Chinese next time. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Peter 来信咨询如何把汉语学好。请你根据以下提示给他写一封建议信：（1）参加中文学习班；（2）看中文书刊、电视；（3）学唱中文歌曲；（4）交中国朋友。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：ask for advice(寻求建议)；take a Chinese course (上中文课)；be able to (能够)；practice with (和……练习)；in addition (而且)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.运用it作形式主语结构；Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter来信咨询如何把汉语学好。请你根据以下提示给他写一封建议信：（1）参加中文学习班；
（2）看中文书刊、电视；
（3）学唱中文歌曲；
（4）交中国朋友。
要求：
1. 词数不少于50；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.字迹工整；
4.电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try writing to me in Chinese next time. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Peter 来信咨询如何把汉语学好。请你根据以下提示给他写一封建议信：（1）参加中文学习班；（2）看中文书刊、电视；（3）学唱中文歌曲；（4）交中国朋友。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：ask for advice(寻求建议)；take a Chinese course (上中文课)；be able to (能够)；practice with (和……练习)；in addition (而且)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.运用it作形式主语结构；Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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