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书面表达。假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Jonah来信说,想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、

英语作文范文 07-09
书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Jonah来信说,想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中,你建议他来过哪个节?请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。可以适当添加内容,使文章看起来更加充实,要组成通顺连贯的短文。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的结尾已经给出,不计入总字数。
Dear Jonah,   
_____________________________________________
I am looking forward to your coming.
                                                                    Yours ,
Li Hua

范文】Dear Jonah
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. But I really hope you can come and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with me. 
The Mid-autumn Festival, a special occasion for family reunion, falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year.
It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight. On this day, the moon is said to be its biggest and brightest. It's also a day for special foods like moon cakes.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Jonah来信说,想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中,你建议他来过哪个节?请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):traditional Chinese festivals (中国传统节日);the Dragon Boat Festival (端午节);the Mid-autumn Festival (中秋节);the Spring Festival (春节);reunion (团聚)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.运用了宾语从句;It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight.运用不定式作表语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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