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书面表达假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个要来中国参加“垃圾分类,节约资源”活动的国际中学生组织正在招募志愿者,

英语作文范文 07-16
书面表达(满分25)
假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个要来中国参加“垃圾分类,节约资源”活动的国际中学生组织正在招募志愿者,请你写一封电子邮件应聘职位。
内容包括:
1. 写邮件的目的;
2 英语能力;
3. 相关知识和经验。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:垃圾分类 garbage sorting
Dear Sir or Madam,
__________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
范文】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’m writing to apply for the post of volunteer.
I believe I would be the right person for the position. For one thing, I once studied English in Britain as an exchange student for two years, so I have no difficulty in communicating with others in English. For another thing, I have learned some basic knowledge about garbage sorting via the Internet. And I’ve been taking an active part in activities of garbage sorting in my community. So it would be easy for me to pass on relevant information to foreign students.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封应聘信。
【详解】第一步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个要来中国参加“垃圾分类,节约资源”活动的国际中学生组织正在招募志愿者,要求写一封电子邮件应聘职位。内容包括:1. 写邮件的目的;2. 英语能力;3. 相关知识和经验。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:apply for, the right person, exchange student, communicating with, basic knowledge about garbage sorting, taking an active part in, pass on, offer the opportunity.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和现在完成时来写。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I believe I would be the right person for the position.运用了宾语从句;So it would be easy for me to pass on relevant information to foreign students.运用了it做形式主语,不定式做真正主语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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