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书面表达(满分 25 分) 假设你是李华。自从进入高中后,你的父母就不要你做家务,在家里父母也不敢大声说话。最近学校英文报“Student Voice”栏目征文,

英语作文范文 07-22
书面表达(满分 25 分)
假设你是李华。自从进入高中后,你的父母就不要你做家务,在家里父母也不敢大声说话。最近学校英文报“Student Voice”栏目征文,你想据此给父母写一封信,谈谈你的看法,发表在该栏目。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mom and Dad,
__________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
范文】Dear Mom and Dad,
Since I entered senior high school, I’ve sensed some changes at home. For one thing, whenever I try to help you with some housework, you’ll ask me to go back to my study, saying that my study is the most important thing for me. For another, you dare not make any noise at home, fearing it would make me unhappy and unable to put my heart into my study.
I know how you feel, but I don’t expect our family life goes this way. To begin with, I hope to see our family filled with laughter, which can certainly provide a nice environment for me. Besides, doing some housework can help me get away from my study for a short time.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文
【详解】此文是一封信,要求根据李华进入高中后,父母就不要他做家务,在家里父母也不敢大声说话这一现象,在学校英文报“Student Voice”栏目给父母写一封信,谈谈看法。文章用第一人称来写,主要分两部分:1.描述上面提到的现象;2.发表自己的看法。本文应该用一般现在时态。要注意上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,那么要适当使用过渡词语。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。也要注意书写,认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
【点睛】写作时要条理清楚,观点明确。还要注意句式的变化,如宾语从句that my study is the most important thing for me.和it would make me unhappy and unable to put my heart into my study.非谓语动词saying,fearing和doing some housework的用法;定语从句which can certainly provide a nice environment for me.还运用了put my heart into,filled with,get away from等词语和For one thing, For another, To begin with, Besides等连接词。
 
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