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书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:

英语作文范文 07-30
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2)内容:学习唐诗;
(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】随着时代的发展,电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎,所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉。根据提示可知,本篇为一封信件;假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。考生成文时应注意:1. 要点要齐全:(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主;3. 人称:第二人称为主;4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如宾语从句I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.定语从句On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall.非谓语动词Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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