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写作假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件, 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工,内容包括:

英语作文范文 08-02
写作(共两节,满分40分)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件, 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工,内容包括:
1. 目的和意义;
2. 时间、地点和内容;
3. 请求回复。注意:
1.词数 100 词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful.
The Cultural Center lies opposite to our school. Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. We are expected to help do some cleaning and keep order. We can also hand out fliers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.
I hope you can join us. It will be of great benefit to you. Your early reply is greatly appreciated.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文,要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】根据提示信息,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。要求给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件, 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。1.首先注意时态使用一般现在时,其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求,可以分为三大部分;第一部分介绍做义工的目的和意义;第二部分告知时间、地点和内容;第三部分请求回复。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式,为文章增添色彩;注意使用连接词、衔接词,使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言表述流畅。文章使用了一些高分句型。1. I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful which引导的非限制性定语从句。2. since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. 本句是since引导的时间状语从句。3. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.本句使用了并列结构not only…but (also)。
 
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