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书面表达(满分25分) 假设你是李华,你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛,并从三十名选手中脱颖而出,荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间,你的外教Mr.Crai

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书面表达(满分25)
假设你是李华,你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛,并从三十名选手中脱颖而出,荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间,你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.获奖情况及感受;    2.回顾准备过程;   3.感谢他帮助;    4.邀他来家做客。
注意:1.词数100词左右;   2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
提示:十佳奖:Top Ten Prize   
Dear Mr. Craige,
                                      
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Craige,
I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school.
The final result was totally beyond my imagination. It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my spoken English. You communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation, intonation as well. What's more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result. I have benefited from this competition a lot.
All in all, I really appreciate your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封感谢信:假设你是李华,你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛,并从三十名选手中脱颖而出,荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间,你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:

1.获奖情况及感受;2.回顾准备过程;3.感谢他的帮助;4.邀他来家做客。特别注意时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:express my thanks for your help(对你的帮助表示感谢);beyond my imagination(超出了我的想象);in my spoken English(用我的英语口语);benefited from this competition a lot(从这场竞争中获益良多);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句;It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English.句中使用强调句型;Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result.句中使用虚拟语气。
 
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