写作（满分15分）
假定你是李华，你最近学习了课文Robert Burns and his poetry 后，非常喜爱诗人罗伯特和他的诗歌，正好你的日本笔友 Yumi前些天给你发了一封邮件，希望你推荐值得学习的英文诗歌。请你结合以下要点给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.诗人简介：
2.推荐代表作《一朵红红的玫瑰》并指明诗歌主旨。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Yumi,
I'm writing to recommend to you my favourite English poet Robert and his masterpiece"A Red,Red Rose”.
___________________________________________________
Robert is indeed a wise choice,and I'd be glad if you enjoy his poems.Look forward to hearing of your reviews.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Yumi,
I'm writing to recommend to you my favourite English poet Robert Bums and his masterpiece"A Red,Red Rose".
Robert Burns, a supreme romantic poet, was born in Alloway, Scotland in 1759. He earned his living by farming and lived in poverty all his life, but he had a reputation for being humorous and pleasant to be around. Unfortunately, Robert died young at an age of 37 in 1796. "A Red, Red rose" is a classic love poem, in which he compares his girl to a red rose and affectionately makes the promise to come back to her however far he travels.
Robert is indeed a wise choice,and I'd be glad if you enjoy his poems. Look forward to hearing of your reviews.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你最近学习了课文Robert Burns and his poetry 后，非常喜爱诗人罗伯特和他的诗歌，正好你的日本笔友 Yumi前些天给你发了一封邮件，希望你推荐值得学习的英文诗歌。请你结合以下要点给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.诗人简介：2.推荐代表作《一朵红红的玫瑰》并指明诗歌主旨。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：romantic poet (浪漫主义诗人)；be born in (出生于)；earn one’s living (谋生)；in poverty (贫困)；reputation (名誉)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如He earned his living by farming and lived in poverty all his life, but he had a reputation for being humorous and pleasant to be around.非谓语动词的运用；"A Red, Red rose" is a classic love poem, in which he compares his girl to a red rose and affectionately makes the promise to come back to her however far he travels.运用了非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，你最近学习了课文Robert Burns and his poetry 后，非常喜爱诗人罗伯特和他的诗歌，正好你的日本笔友 Yumi前些天给你发了一封邮件，希望你推荐值得学习的英文诗歌。请你结合以下要点给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.诗人简介：
| 生卒 | 1759年－1796年 |
| 出生地 | Alloway, Scotland |
| 性格 | 风趣、友善 |
| 生活状况 | 贫穷、务农 |
| 派系 | 浪漫主义诗人 |
2.推荐代表作《一朵红红的玫瑰》并指明诗歌主旨。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Yumi,
I'm writing to recommend to you my favourite English poet Robert and his masterpiece"A Red,Red Rose”.
___________________________________________________
Robert is indeed a wise choice,and I'd be glad if you enjoy his poems.Look forward to hearing of your reviews.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Yumi,
I'm writing to recommend to you my favourite English poet Robert Bums and his masterpiece"A Red,Red Rose".
Robert Burns, a supreme romantic poet, was born in Alloway, Scotland in 1759. He earned his living by farming and lived in poverty all his life, but he had a reputation for being humorous and pleasant to be around. Unfortunately, Robert died young at an age of 37 in 1796. "A Red, Red rose" is a classic love poem, in which he compares his girl to a red rose and affectionately makes the promise to come back to her however far he travels.
Robert is indeed a wise choice,and I'd be glad if you enjoy his poems. Look forward to hearing of your reviews.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你最近学习了课文Robert Burns and his poetry 后，非常喜爱诗人罗伯特和他的诗歌，正好你的日本笔友 Yumi前些天给你发了一封邮件，希望你推荐值得学习的英文诗歌。请你结合以下要点给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.诗人简介：2.推荐代表作《一朵红红的玫瑰》并指明诗歌主旨。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：romantic poet (浪漫主义诗人)；be born in (出生于)；earn one’s living (谋生)；in poverty (贫困)；reputation (名誉)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如He earned his living by farming and lived in poverty all his life, but he had a reputation for being humorous and pleasant to be around.非谓语动词的运用；"A Red, Red rose" is a classic love poem, in which he compares his girl to a red rose and affectionately makes the promise to come back to her however far he travels.运用了非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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