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假定你是李华，你从国外网站购买了一辆健身自行车，后来发现其问题较多。请就此向美国总部写邮件投诉。内容如下：
1.购车情况；
2.存在的问题（车身重；刹车失灵等）
3.解决方案。
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：健身自行车an exercise bike 刹车brake
Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m sorry to write to complain about the exercise bike that I purchased from your online shop ten days ago.
After unpacking and trying it out, I was surprised to find the bike didn’t consist with what you advertised. First of all, it is much heavier than described, so it is not convenient for me to lift it upstairs. Even worse than that, its brakes don’t work once in a while.
For the above reasons, I strongly demand either a new one should be posted to me immediately or my money should be refunded.
Thanks for your consideration. And I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你从国外网站购买了一辆健身自行车，后来发现其问题较多。请就此向美国总部写邮件投诉。内容如下：1.购车情况；2.存在问题（车身重；刹车失灵等）；3.解决方案。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：an exercise bike (健身自行车)；purchase(购买)；try out(尝试)；first of all (首先)；convenient for (便于……)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m sorry to write to complain about the exercise bike that I purchased from your online shop ten days ago.运用了定语从句；After unpacking and trying it out, I was surprised to find the bike didn’t consist with what you advertised.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，你从国外网站购买了一辆健身自行车，后来发现其问题较多。请就此向美国总部写邮件投诉。内容如下：
1.购车情况；
2.存在的问题（车身重；刹车失灵等）
3.解决方案。
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：健身自行车an exercise bike 刹车brake
Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m sorry to write to complain about the exercise bike that I purchased from your online shop ten days ago.
After unpacking and trying it out, I was surprised to find the bike didn’t consist with what you advertised. First of all, it is much heavier than described, so it is not convenient for me to lift it upstairs. Even worse than that, its brakes don’t work once in a while.
For the above reasons, I strongly demand either a new one should be posted to me immediately or my money should be refunded.
Thanks for your consideration. And I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你从国外网站购买了一辆健身自行车，后来发现其问题较多。请就此向美国总部写邮件投诉。内容如下：1.购车情况；2.存在问题（车身重；刹车失灵等）；3.解决方案。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：an exercise bike (健身自行车)；purchase(购买)；try out(尝试)；first of all (首先)；convenient for (便于……)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m sorry to write to complain about the exercise bike that I purchased from your online shop ten days ago.运用了定语从句；After unpacking and trying it out, I was surprised to find the bike didn’t consist with what you advertised.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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