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假设你是学生李华，最近你发现很多同学为了学习不吃早饭、经常熬夜等不健康学习生活方式。学校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“健康生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文。
1. 指出现在部分同学不健康的学习生活方式：
2. 结合实际从以下三方面提出具体健康生活方式：
a. 膳食；b. 体育锻炼；c. 人生态度。
Dear Editor,
_________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
Recently I have found that some classmates stay up late and skip breakfast, which are not healthy lifestyles. Actually, to help all the students lead a healthy life, I want to offer some suggestions as follows.
First and foremost, we are supposed to have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume much energy while studying. Additionally, it is of equal importance to take exercise on a regular basis, which can contribute to strengthening our bodies and keeping fit.More importantly, it's a positive attitude toward life that makes a difference, helping us release stress and deal with things optimistically whatever happens.
I sincerely hope my advice will be adopted by us students and that we all can live a healthy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是学生李华，最近你发现很多同学为了学习不吃早饭、经常熬夜等不健康学习生活方式。学校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“健康生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文。1. 指出现在部分同学不健康的学习生活方式；2. 结合实际从以下三方面提出具体健康生活方式：a. 膳食；b. 体育锻炼；c. 人生态度。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：skip breakfast (不吃早餐)；be supposed to (应该)；have a balanced diet (饮食均衡)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Recently I have found that some classmates stay up late and skip breakfast, which are not healthy lifestyles.运用了非限制性定语从句；First and foremost, we are supposed to have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume much energy while studying.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假设你是学生李华，最近你发现很多同学为了学习不吃早饭、经常熬夜等不健康学习生活方式。学校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“健康生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文。
1. 指出现在部分同学不健康的学习生活方式：
2. 结合实际从以下三方面提出具体健康生活方式：
a. 膳食；b. 体育锻炼；c. 人生态度。
Dear Editor,
_________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
Recently I have found that some classmates stay up late and skip breakfast, which are not healthy lifestyles. Actually, to help all the students lead a healthy life, I want to offer some suggestions as follows.
First and foremost, we are supposed to have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume much energy while studying. Additionally, it is of equal importance to take exercise on a regular basis, which can contribute to strengthening our bodies and keeping fit.More importantly, it's a positive attitude toward life that makes a difference, helping us release stress and deal with things optimistically whatever happens.
I sincerely hope my advice will be adopted by us students and that we all can live a healthy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是学生李华，最近你发现很多同学为了学习不吃早饭、经常熬夜等不健康学习生活方式。学校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“健康生活方式”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文。1. 指出现在部分同学不健康的学习生活方式；2. 结合实际从以下三方面提出具体健康生活方式：a. 膳食；b. 体育锻炼；c. 人生态度。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：skip breakfast (不吃早餐)；be supposed to (应该)；have a balanced diet (饮食均衡)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Recently I have found that some classmates stay up late and skip breakfast, which are not healthy lifestyles.运用了非限制性定语从句；First and foremost, we are supposed to have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day, because we consume much energy while studying.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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