书面表达 (满分25分) 假设你是李华，你校英文报将举办一次题为”How to Build a Clean Campus”的写作竞赛，请你给全校学生写一封信约稿，希望大家积极参与。内容如下:
英语作文范文 08-14
书面表达 (满分25分)
假设你是李华，你校英文报将举办一次题为”How to Build a Clean Campus”的写作竞赛，请你给全校学生写一封信约稿，希望大家积极参与。内容如下:
1. 举办目的(提高同学们的意识)
2. 稿件内容
3. 稿件长度:500词以内
4. 交稿日期:7月20日前
注意: 文章的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellows,
Our campus environment is becoming increasingly worse because of some improper behavior of the students.
_____________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
【答案】Dear fellows,
Our campus environment is becoming increasingly worse because of some improper behavior of the students. To raise everyone’s awareness of the importance of a clean learning environment, our school newspaper is holding a writing competition on “How to Build a Clean Campus”. Here are some details about it.
To begin with, you can talk about the present situation of our campus environment. Besides, you can share with us your idea on how to ban some improper behavior, such as spitting or throwing rubbish everywhere. What’s more, your article should be limited within 500 words. Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to me before July 20th, so that it can be judged in time.
Hopefully, you all could do me the favor and take an active part in it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假设你是李华，你校英文报将举办一次题为”How to Build a Clean Campus”的写作竞赛，请你给全校学生写一封信约稿，希望大家积极参与。
【详解】假设你是李华，你校英文报将举办一次题为”How to Build a Clean Campus”的写作竞赛，请你给全校学生写一封信约稿，希望大家积极参与。内容如下:1. 举办目的(提高同学们的意识) ；2. 稿件内容；3. 稿件长度:500词以内；4. 交稿日期:7月20日前。分析可知，应该以第二人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。To raise everyone’s awareness of the importance of a clean learning environment, our school newspaper is holding a writing competition on “How to Build a Clean Campus”.不定式用作目的状语。Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to me before July 20th, so that it can be judged in time.
宾语从句的运用。
假设你是李华，你校英文报将举办一次题为”How to Build a Clean Campus”的写作竞赛，请你给全校学生写一封信约稿，希望大家积极参与。内容如下:
1. 举办目的(提高同学们的意识)
2. 稿件内容
3. 稿件长度:500词以内
4. 交稿日期:7月20日前
注意: 文章的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellows,
Our campus environment is becoming increasingly worse because of some improper behavior of the students.
_____________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
【答案】Dear fellows,
Our campus environment is becoming increasingly worse because of some improper behavior of the students. To raise everyone’s awareness of the importance of a clean learning environment, our school newspaper is holding a writing competition on “How to Build a Clean Campus”. Here are some details about it.
To begin with, you can talk about the present situation of our campus environment. Besides, you can share with us your idea on how to ban some improper behavior, such as spitting or throwing rubbish everywhere. What’s more, your article should be limited within 500 words. Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to me before July 20th, so that it can be judged in time.
Hopefully, you all could do me the favor and take an active part in it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假设你是李华，你校英文报将举办一次题为”How to Build a Clean Campus”的写作竞赛，请你给全校学生写一封信约稿，希望大家积极参与。
【详解】假设你是李华，你校英文报将举办一次题为”How to Build a Clean Campus”的写作竞赛，请你给全校学生写一封信约稿，希望大家积极参与。内容如下:1. 举办目的(提高同学们的意识) ；2. 稿件内容；3. 稿件长度:500词以内；4. 交稿日期:7月20日前。分析可知，应该以第二人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。To raise everyone’s awareness of the importance of a clean learning environment, our school newspaper is holding a writing competition on “How to Build a Clean Campus”.不定式用作目的状语。Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to me before July 20th, so that it can be judged in time.
宾语从句的运用。
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