书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，你最近读了一篇主题为"The True Meaning of Happiness"的文章。请给你的英国朋友Jack发一封邮件，与他分享你对快
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书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你最近读了一篇主题为"The True Meaning of Happiness"的文章。请给你的英国朋友Jack发一封邮件，与他分享你对快乐的理解，内容包括：
1.快乐的真正意义；
2.获得快乐的途径。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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【答案】Dear Jack，
Recently, 1 read a passage---- The True Meaning of Happiness. I'm glad to share my views with you. Undoubtedly, all of us look for happiness, but what is the true meaning of happiness? Personally,working hard and being committed to whatever we are doing can make us feel happy. In reality, nothing can replace the sense of achievement one feels after much devotion.
My best way to gain happiness is as follows. Firstly, I'm buried in my studies. Only when I try my best can I gain a sense of happiness. Secondly, I'm willing to share my happiness with others. Sharing can release my sorrow and double my pleasure.
What's your opinion? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你最近读了一篇主题为"The True Meaning of Happiness"的文章。请给你的英国朋友Jack发一封邮件，与他分享你对快乐的理解，内容包括：1.快乐的真正意义；2.获得快乐的途径。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：share my views with you（和你分享我的观点）；look for happiness（寻找幸福）；being committed to（决心从事）；gain a sense of happiness（获得一种幸福感）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。working hard and being committed to whatever we are doing can make us feel happy.句中使用动名词做主语和whatever引导的宾语从句；Only when I try my best can I gain a sense of happiness.部分倒装句用在句中。
假定你是李华，你最近读了一篇主题为"The True Meaning of Happiness"的文章。请给你的英国朋友Jack发一封邮件，与他分享你对快乐的理解，内容包括：
1.快乐的真正意义；
2.获得快乐的途径。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
__________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Jack，
Recently, 1 read a passage---- The True Meaning of Happiness. I'm glad to share my views with you. Undoubtedly, all of us look for happiness, but what is the true meaning of happiness? Personally,working hard and being committed to whatever we are doing can make us feel happy. In reality, nothing can replace the sense of achievement one feels after much devotion.
My best way to gain happiness is as follows. Firstly, I'm buried in my studies. Only when I try my best can I gain a sense of happiness. Secondly, I'm willing to share my happiness with others. Sharing can release my sorrow and double my pleasure.
What's your opinion? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你最近读了一篇主题为"The True Meaning of Happiness"的文章。请给你的英国朋友Jack发一封邮件，与他分享你对快乐的理解，内容包括：1.快乐的真正意义；2.获得快乐的途径。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：share my views with you（和你分享我的观点）；look for happiness（寻找幸福）；being committed to（决心从事）；gain a sense of happiness（获得一种幸福感）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。working hard and being committed to whatever we are doing can make us feel happy.句中使用动名词做主语和whatever引导的宾语从句；Only when I try my best can I gain a sense of happiness.部分倒装句用在句中。
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