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书面表达(满分 15 分) 假如你是天津一中高三(1)班的学生李津,瑞典友好学校的笔友Chris给你写信,询问你升入毕业年级的近况,同时告诉你因为疫情的原因,原定今年十月份的来津学访计划不得不推迟。请

英语作文范文 03-09
书面表达(满分 15 分)
假如你是天津一中高三(1)班的学生李津,瑞典友好学校的笔友Chris给你写信,询问你升入毕业年级的近况,同时告诉你因为疫情的原因,原定今年十月份的来津学访计划不得不推迟。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1)表达遗憾并邀请他合适的时候来津;
2)描述高三的生活(如日常作息、学习状态等);
3)对于高三生活的初步感受和对未来的展望。
注意:
1)词数:100 词左右;
2)可以适当增加内容,以使行文连贯。 
参考词汇:
新冠疫情 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m very glad to hear from you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m very glad to hear from you. I'm sorry that you can't come to Tianjin this October due to the epidemic. You asked me about my high school life in Senior Three, let me give you a short introduction .
Generally speaking, life in high school is busy and fulfilling. It can’t be denied that study is my priority, I must spend most of my time and energy on it. We always have much homework and a large number of examinations. Life in high school makes us realize time is limited. However, I can get a sense of achievement when I make progress in study. The most important is that my friends bring much happiness to me and my teachers’ and parents’ care inspires me to go on. They are the person who grow with me. We believe that our future is very beautiful and wonderful.
Looking forward to your coming some time in the future.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求给朋友写一封回信。
【详解】第一步:根据提示可知,假如你是天津一中高三(1)班的学生李津,瑞典友好学校的笔友Chris给你写信,询问你升入毕业年级的近况,同时告诉你因为疫情的原因,原定今年十月份的来津学访计划不得不推迟。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:1)表达遗憾并邀请他合适的时候来津;2)描述高三的生活(如日常作息、学习状态等);3)对于高三生活的初步感受和对未来的展望。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:due to the epidemic, high school life, busy and fulfilling, my priority, homework and examinations, a sense of achievement, inspire, beautiful and wonderful.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文以一般现在时为主。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如It can’t be denied that study is my priority, I must spend most of my time and energy on it. 运用了形式主语和主语从句;The most important is that my friends bring much happiness to me and my teachers’ and parents’ care inspires me to go on.运用了that引导的表语从句;They are the person who grow with me.运用了定语从句;We believe that our future is very beautiful and wonderful.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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