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书面表达(满分25分) “一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。要求如下:(1)热情、有礼;(2)熟悉中国传统文化;(3)英语口语流利。假设你是新华中学学生李华,请给组委会

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书面表达(满分25分)
 “一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。要求如下:(1)热情、有礼;(2)熟悉中国传统文化;(3)英语口语流利。假设你是新华中学学生李华,请给组委会写一封应聘信。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
生词:“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛 the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter.
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter.As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.All our citizens are looking forward to this special event.First of all,I promise I will,with great passion,strive to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely. Besides,I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture,which enables me to spread our splendid culture.What's more,I'm good at English and Chinese,which will play an important role in communication during the forum.To sum up,l believe I can be a qualified volunteer.I will try my best if l 'm accepted.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封应聘信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封应聘信:“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。要求如下:(1)热情、有礼;(2)熟悉中国传统文化;(3)英语口语流利。假设你是新华中学学生李华,请给组委会写一封应聘信。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:be a volunteer(成为一个志愿者);looking forward to this special event(期待这一特别的活动);strive to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely(竭诚为国内外贵宾服务);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.句中as引导时间状语从句;I promise I will,with great passion,strive to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely.句中使用宾语从句;I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture,which enables me to spread our splendid culture.句中which引导非限制性定语从句;另外,First of all, Besides, What's more,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
 
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