假定你是李华，踢球时不慎摔倒。你需要给你的老师Mr. Brown写一张假条，内容包括： 1.请假的时间；2.请假的理由；3.缺课的处理办法。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右；
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假定你是李华，踢球时不慎摔倒。你需要给你的老师Mr. Brown写一张假条，内容包括：
1.请假的时间；2.请假的理由；3.缺课的处理办法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm writing to ask for a leave from September 7th to 13th. When playing football with my friends yesterday, I fell over and had my left foot injured. I was sent to the clinic for immediate treatment and was advised to stay in bed for a week. To support my request, a sick leave certificate by the doctor is enclosed here. As for the missed lessons during my absence, I'll catch up on them as soon as I come back.
I would feel much obliged if you could grant me my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，踢球时不慎摔倒。你需要给你的老师Mr. Brown写一张假条，内容包括：1.请假的时间；2.请假的理由；3.缺课的处理办法。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：ask for a leave (请假)；play football(踢足球)；fell over(摔倒)；clinic(医务室)；treatment(治疗)；stay in bed(卧床)；support(证实)；a sick leave certificate(病假单)；as for(至于)；absence(缺席)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如When playing football with my friends yesterday, I fell over and had my left foot injured.运用省略句；I would feel much obliged if you could grant me my application.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
1.请假的时间；2.请假的理由；3.缺课的处理办法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm writing to ask for a leave from September 7th to 13th. When playing football with my friends yesterday, I fell over and had my left foot injured. I was sent to the clinic for immediate treatment and was advised to stay in bed for a week. To support my request, a sick leave certificate by the doctor is enclosed here. As for the missed lessons during my absence, I'll catch up on them as soon as I come back.
I would feel much obliged if you could grant me my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，踢球时不慎摔倒。你需要给你的老师Mr. Brown写一张假条，内容包括：1.请假的时间；2.请假的理由；3.缺课的处理办法。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：ask for a leave (请假)；play football(踢足球)；fell over(摔倒)；clinic(医务室)；treatment(治疗)；stay in bed(卧床)；support(证实)；a sick leave certificate(病假单)；as for(至于)；absence(缺席)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如When playing football with my friends yesterday, I fell over and had my left foot injured.运用省略句；I would feel much obliged if you could grant me my application.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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