关注我们

英语投诉信 教案

教案设计 02-28 英语教案

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours
Li Tao
【写作指导】
本文要求给网店客服写封投诉信,内容包括:1.出现的问题;2,你希望的解决方案 3.希望能尽快得到回复。应该用一般过去时说明出现的问题,一般现在时说明第二和第三方面的内容;人称应该以第一人称为主,写作时注意增加细节,使衔接合理;还要尽量用高中阶段学习的词汇和句型,注意长短搭配和高级词汇句型的应用。
范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to make a complaint about a shirt, a coat and a pair of trousers which I bought from your online shop last month. Unfortunately, when the order arrived I realized that the shirt had a button missing and was not the size I had ordered. In addition, when I tried out on the coat, I noticed that it had a hole in it. What's worse, the color of the trousers was not what I had asked for either.
 On the whole, I'm not satisfied with your goods, I would like you to either change the order or give me a full refund.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本文结构明确,思路清晰,把内容要点都涵盖了,同时注意应用了较高级的短语和句子,对文章增设不少。比如:I'm writing to make a complaint about a shirt, a coat and a pair of trousers which I bought from your online shop last month. 运用了定语从句;唉,Unfortunately, when the order arrived I realized that the shirt had a button missing and was not the size I had ordered. 运用了时间状语从句和宾语从句;What's worse, the color of the trousers was not what I had asked for either. 运用了表语从句。文章还注意了句子的变化和衔接,如In addition, what's worse ,on the whole等。
 
Writing 5
 
假设你叫李华,请就本校食堂存在的问题,向校长写一封投诉信。内容包括:一投诉的原因;二投诉的具体问题,2到3.点;三提出的合理建议。
注意: 1.100词左右,开头,结尾已经给出,但计入总词数。2.可以适当增加细节,以使得行文连贯。
Dear Headmaster,
I am Li Hua, a senor 3 student.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
 
【写作指导】
书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封投诉信。第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是一名高中学生,名叫李华,请你就本校食堂存在的问题向校长写封投诉信。内容包括投诉的原因,投诉的具体问题,提出合理的建议。第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词组及句子。You complain about the poor service of our canteen抱怨我们食堂的服务差;the vegetables are over cooked,蔬菜煮得过久;compared with takeout food与其他外卖相比。第4步:连句成文。注意使用恰当的连接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要清晰规范,保持整洁美观的界面是非常重要的。
范文
Dear Headmaster,
I am Li Hua, a senor 3 student. I venture to write you a letter to complain about the poor service of our canteen.
What makes the students complain about the most is the poor quality of the food. The steam bread is often cold and the vegetables are overcooked. With the declining quality of the restaurant of our school, it is intolerable for us students to meal at school. In addition, compared with chicken out food, the price of the food in our canteen is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily. Worse still, tableware that isn’t sanitized is used from time to time, and some students are ill as a result of it.
 I strongly recommend that these problems should be solved as soon as possible. I would appreciate it if you could take my complaint seriously. 
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文没有中国式英语句式,显示了很高的英语驾驭能力。如:What makes the students complain about the most is the poor quality of the food. 运用了主语从句;In addition, compared with chicken out food, the price of the food in our canteen is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily. 运用了结果状语从句;Worse still, tableware that isn’t sanitized is used from time to time, and some students are ill as a result of it. 运用了定语从句等。
喜欢发布评论
留言与评论(共有 0 条评论)
   
验证码: