Dear Jane，
Congratulations！So excited am I to hear the wonderful news when your admission to a key senior school. This must be a moment of hope and pride. Fully understanding your eagerness for the life in high school, I have some tips that may help.
The life in high school quite differs. Not only is it to be splendid with its various activities and diverse courses, but it is also more intense and fast-paced. So it is better to prepare yourself in advance, or you may easily feel overwhelmed and lost.
Show my congratulations again and many wishes for your my life ahead .
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本篇作文要点齐全，结合完整条理清晰应用的吊灯的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好的完成了写作任务。例如：So excited am I to hear the wonderful news when your admission to a key senior school. 运用了倒装句式；Not only is it to be splendid with its various activities and diverse courses, but it is also more intense and fast-paced. 运用了not only…but also; So it is better to prepare yourself in advance, or you may easily feel overwhelmed and lost. 运用了形式主语；Show my congratulations again and many wishes for your my life ahead. 运用了祈使句等。
Writing 2
假定你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中获得一等奖，请你根据以下内容给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：一向他表示祝贺；二向他介绍成功的经验；三希望有一天能像他一样成功。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I hear you have won first prize____________________________________________________________________
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Li Hua
【写作指导】
假定你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中获得一等奖，请你根据以下内容给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：一向他表示祝贺；二向他介绍成功的经验；三希望有一天能像他一样成功。写作时不要逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。同时要把所提出的要点写全，语句通顺，同时要准确运用时态、语态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理利用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增添色彩。
【范文】
Dear David,
I hear you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to be called congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
As your best friend, I'm proud of you, your pronunciation and fluent English, especially your beautiful voice, left me a deep impression. I hope that I can be successful like you one day. So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be a great help to me in my learning. I will appreciate it if you can run me back and give me your advice. Look forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
I hear you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to be called congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.使用宾语从句和并列句；I hope that I can be successful like you one day.句子中使用宾语从句；So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? 在句子中使用了宾语从句 ；I will appreciate it if you can run me back and give me your advice.固定句式的使用为文章增添色彩；另外一些高级词汇、短语be proud of、especially、left me a deep impression、 share with、 be of great help、 look forward to等的使用，也是文中亮点。
Writing 3
假如你是李华，你的好友你的好友鼓励，今年被评为“新疆最美少年”，你为他感到骄傲，并给她写一封祝贺信。要点如下：1.表达你诚挚的祝贺；2. 简要描述鼓励的先进事迹，如乐于助人、孝敬父母，品质兼优等。3.表达你要向鼓励学习的意愿和美好祝福。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Guli,
I have learned with delight that ___________________________________________________________
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