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教案设计 03-10 英语作文写作模板

 
典例 
假设你是李华,你校广播站正在招收英文编辑,请你根据以下提示,向负责此事的外教Mr. Mark 申请这一职位。要点包括:
职位要求 1.有很强的英语表达能力;
2.关心时事。
个人优势 1.有做记者的经历,沟通能力强;
2.父亲是一位专职编辑,深受其影响;
3.……
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题要求用英文写份书面求职申请。应该注意以下几点:
1.大方得体,不落俗套。应尽可能彰显个性,做到与众不同,方能抓住机会;
2.言简意赅,引人入胜。求职信属于应用文,言辞要求正式、庄重、准确,忌调侃、俏皮、花哨、夸夸其谈;3.充满自信,态度诚恳。自己首先得信心十足,但不能自吹自擂,满篇浮夸,不能少了敬语、祝颂语。
范文赏析】
Dear Mr. Mark,
I’m writing to apply for an English editor of our school broadcasting station.
I’m qualified for the position for the following reasons. First, I have a good command of English communication skills and take great interest in journalism. Second, I was a part-time reporter in junior middle school, which developed my communication and interpersonal skills. In addition, my father is a professional editor, by whom I was deeply influenced and from whom I learned a lot.
I really hope I will be one of you. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

亮点点击
所给范文主题明确,结构完整。重点突出,详略得当。语言正式、得体、准确、流畅、地道,词汇与句式高级,摈弃铅华但不失文采。关联词语运用得恰到好处,使整个语篇衔接紧密,逻辑清楚。难能可贵的是,复杂结构和高级词汇的运用为短文增彩不少。
关联词语:first,second(排序信号词);in addition(附加信号词)等。
亮点词组:be qualified for而非be suitable for;have a good command of 而非be good at;take great interest in 而非 be very interested in等。
高级句式:which引导的非限制性定语从句;by whom... and from whom... (定语从句连用)等。
 
必背范文
Writting1
假定你是李华,想在毕业实习期间去一家出版社做兼职英语编辑。请你用英文给该出版社的英语主编写封信。要点如下:
1)写信目的;
2)自我简介;
3)表达愿望。
注意:1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3)开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chief Editor,
    I learned that your press is looking for a part-time English editor. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for reading my letter and I'm looking forward to your reply.
 
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生李华的身份,给某出版社的英语编制写封信,告诉他你想在毕业实习期间去该出版社做兼职英语编辑。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)写信目的;2)自我简介;3)表达愿望。提示语是文章的总体框架,要在其范围内进行分析、构思和想象。考生要依据提示按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态为主。同时,注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
范文】 
Dear editor.。
I’ve learned that your plan class is looking for part- time English editor. I'm writing to apply for this position.
I have a good command of both written and spoken English. Besides, I have a good computer skill, which is certainly play an important role in editing. What's more, I'm good at getting on with others and fond of learning new things. More importantly, I have great patience and a strong sense of responsibility. As we all know, editing is hard work that is require a high level of concentration. Therefore, I believe I'm the right person for this job.
 I’ d appreciate it if you could give me the chance and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

【亮点点击】
本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章档次,体现了英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如:I’ve learned that your plan class is looking for part- time English editor.运用了宾语从句;Besides, I have a good computer skill, which is certainly play an important role in editing. 运用了非限制性定语从句;As we all know, editing is hard work that is require a high level of concentration. 运用了非限制性定语从句和限制性定语从句。Therefore, I believe I'm the right person for this job.运用了宾语从句;I’ d appreciate it if you could give me the chance.运用了条件状语从句。
 
Writing 2
假定你是李华,在校报看到了一则招聘启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点写一封应聘邮件。
写作要点:1. 表明写信意图;2. 陈述应聘目的;3. 说明应聘条件(英语好、能熟练操作电脑、有奉献精神和服务意识等)。
要求:内容向上,语意连贯,结构完整,书写工整,字数100左右。
Dear Ms. Chen,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 21, Grade 3. ……
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to get your reply soon. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达,写作的话题为应聘信,在写作时应注意符合题意,根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤:
  • 阅读提示,弄清所有信息,明确写作要点。
  1. 写信目的:弄清校报,明确写作要点。
  2. 渴望获得机会。
  3. 性格外向,精通英语
  4. 能熟练操作电脑。
  5. 有奉献精神和服务意识。
  6. 如果能考虑我的申请将不胜感激。
  7. 盼望得到回复。
  • 根据要点,写出关键词、短语或句子。
Obtain, outgoing, adept in, live up to, looking forward to, additionally, above all, I am pretty sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations; I would appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration.
三、连词成句。注意使用一般现在时。
范文】 
Dear Ms. Chen,
I'm Li Hua, a student from class 21 grade 3. I'm writing to apply for the position as an English editor of the School Paper.
I'm really eager to obtain this precious opportunity. As an outgoing girl, I have such a good command of English that I am really eager to obtain this precious opportunity. Additionally, I am adept in operate the computer, which enables me to have an evident advantage over many others. Above all, I am more than glad to devote myself to serving my fellow students as much as possible.
I am pretty sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

【亮点点击】
范文包括了题中要求的所有要点,结构清楚,语义连贯,恰当使用连接词使得这个文章结构紧凑、衔接自然,并且运用了高级词汇和句型提高文章档次。如:I'm writing to apply for the position as an English editor of the School Paper.运用不定式作状语;As an outgoing girl, I have such a good command of English that I am really eager to obtain this precious opportunity.运用了宾语从句;Additionally, I am adept in operate the computer, which enables me to have an evident advantage over many others.运用非限定性定语从句;Above all, I am more than glad to devote myself to serving my fellow students as much as possible.运用above all进行总括,并运用devote … to …固定表达;I would appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration.运用条件状语从句。
 
 
Writing 3
假如你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到有关“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。阅读启事,并根据要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on March 15-17, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email to Ms. Chen at chenlaoshiaef.com.
写作要求:表达写信意图;陈述应征目的;说明应征条件(性格、能力等);
注意:
1)开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2)可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;
3)词数100词左右。
Dear Ms. Chen,
    I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3.____________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封应征邮件,写作背景:在校报英语专栏你看到有关“英语文化节”的一则招募启示。阅读启示,并根据要求写一封应征邮件。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)表达写信意图;陈述应征目的;说明应征条件(性格、能力等); 2)开头已经写好,比计入总词数;3)可根据情况增加细节,使得行文连贯。考生要认真阅读前面的提示,根据所给要点,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表达出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词和过渡词,适当增加细节,以使得行文连贯。
范文】 
Dear Ms.
I am Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’ m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully. I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciate by teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

【亮点点击】
本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如:I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.运用了原因状语从句;I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了结果状语从句;I have lent a helping hand to her in sevral English activities of my class, which have been appreciate by teachers and classmates.运用了非限定性定语从句;I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.运用了宾语从句;I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account.运用了I would appreciate it if句式。
 
Writing 4
 假如你是李华,最近你从校报上看到一则广告,你校教John暑期打算开一西餐馆,需要招聘5名擅长英语的暑期兼职工,请你根据下列要点提示写一封求职信。
  1. 李华,男,17岁,身体健康。
  2. 擅长英语,口语流利。
  3. 性格外向,交际能力强。
注意:
1)开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2)可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;
3)词数100词左右。
 
Dear John,
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
试题为应用文中的书信写作,是一封求职信。试题只给出写作框架及,并未给出所有的具体细节,为半开放作文。写好此文,需注意三点:
一、书信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但要写好信的结尾。
二、要详略得当,本文应重点写的是:1. 李华,男,17岁,身体健康;2. 擅长英语,口语流利;
3. 性格外向,交际能力强。要注意恰当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过度词语,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
三、
范文
 Dear John,
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job. My name is Li Hua and I am a 17-year-old boy. I think I will be fit for the job. My advantages are as follows:
Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Finally, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teacher.
I would appreciate it if I’m offered the chance. And I’m sure I can be of great help for you. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

【亮点点击】
本文是一篇求职信,格式正确,采用三段式,内容齐全,文章布局合理,同时句子中使用高级词汇和表达。例如:I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job.句中使用不定式完成式;I would appreciate it if I’m offered the chance. 固定句式运用巧妙;另外文中出现了高级词汇和短语as follows, firstly, have no difficulty communicating with, be of great help等,它们为文章增色添彩。
 
 
 
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