英语作文建议信 教案
步骤 内容
1 考点综述
2 真题再现（2017北京卷--到中国旅行线路的建议）
3 要点总结（结构及实例说明、常用词汇和常用短语）
4 题型变化之语法填空
5 题型变化之短文改错
6 模拟强化一 给因沉迷于电脑游戏朋友的建议
7 模拟强化二 给学习中文朋友的建议
一．考点综述
建议信是针对朋友、同事等写的求助信的回复，或对某种不合理的应该纠正的情况提出自己的看法和建议。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
二．真题再现
1.【题目要求】。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.【范文品读】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
三．要点总结
1.【建议信结构以及实例说明 】
1. 写信目的；
2. 介绍详情、说明原因；
3. 提出建议。
（写信目的）I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
（介绍详情、说明原因）Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.
（给出建议）Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
（表达祝愿）Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
2.【建议信常用词汇】
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
步骤 内容
1 考点综述
2 真题再现（2017北京卷--到中国旅行线路的建议）
3 要点总结（结构及实例说明、常用词汇和常用短语）
4 题型变化之语法填空
5 题型变化之短文改错
6 模拟强化一 给因沉迷于电脑游戏朋友的建议
7 模拟强化二 给学习中文朋友的建议
一．考点综述
建议信是针对朋友、同事等写的求助信的回复，或对某种不合理的应该纠正的情况提出自己的看法和建议。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
二．真题再现
1.【题目要求】。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.【范文品读】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
三．要点总结
1.【建议信结构以及实例说明 】
1. 写信目的；
2. 介绍详情、说明原因；
3. 提出建议。
（写信目的）I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
（介绍详情、说明原因）Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.
（给出建议）Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
（表达祝愿）Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
2.【建议信常用词汇】
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
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