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书面表达。 今年暑假你去哪里度假了?请写一篇英语短文来描述你度过的美好或者是无聊的假期。

英语试题 02-10
书面表达。
今年暑假你去哪里度假了?请写一篇英语短文来描述你度过的美好或者是无聊的假期。
要求:1.短文结构完整,要点明确,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑。
2.不少于60词左右
范文】My Summer Vacation
This summer vacation, I went back to my hometown for vacation. I had a wonderful vacation there. My hometown is in the countryside. I just loved riding a bike through the countryside and I often walked round my village. I played with my friends happily in the field .We stayed together and had fun every day .The weather was so nice though it was a little hot. There was so much beautiful sunshine most of the day .Sometimes it rained heavily .In the evening I watched TV or played computer games at home with my friends. Leaving my hometown was very sad, which made me want to cry.
【解析】
【详解】本篇文章是对过去的暑假的描述,故而它的时态应用过去时且人称为第一人称叙事。本文由一系列的在乡下的活动实践构成。例如:loved riding a bike ;walked round my village; played with my friends happily in the field以及watched TV or played computer games at home with my friends。文章开头部分I had a wonderful vacation there及结尾Leaving my hometown was very sad, which made me want to cry是作者感受的描述。
【点睛】叙事文主要是用于说明事件时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how ),例如本文用This summer vacation, I went back to my hometown for vacation点出背景信息。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。另外应注意叙述的人称,动词的时态,叙述的顺序及叙述的过渡。
 
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