书面表达
假定你是高中生李华，你班将于中秋节当晚举行户外中秋晚会，请你写函邀请你们的外教Mary参加。要点如下：
1.通知时间和地点；
2.简介中秋节的意义；
3.告知当晚具体活动。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mary,
I’m Li Hua from class 1. Our class are planning a Mid-Autumn outdoor evening party for students and teachers to develop friendship and experience traditional Chinese culture, and we feel it would be great if you could participate in it.
The Mid-Autumn festival, which provides a time for families and friends to be together, is considered of great significance in China. In the party, we are going to appreciate the fullest and most charming moon. Apart from that, enjoying the delicious moon cake, which is round and symbolizes reunion, is also a must.
Please bear in mind that the party will be held at 8 o’clock next Sunday evening in the open air in front of the teaching building. Looking forward to your coming and sharing a beautiful night with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求写一封邀请函。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邀请函：假定你是高中生李华，你班将于中秋节当晚举行户外中秋晚会，请你写函邀请你们的外教Mary参加。要点如下：1.通知时间和地点；2.简介中秋节的意义；3.告知当晚具体活动。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a Mid-Autumn outdoor evening party（户外中秋晚会）；to develop friendship and experience traditional Chinese culture（发展友谊，体验中国传统文化）；The Mid-Autumn festival（中秋节）；in front of the teaching building（在教学楼前）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。and we feel it would be great if you could participate in it.句中if引导条件状语从句；The Mid-Autumn festival, which provides a time for families and friends to be together, is considered of great significance in China.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；Apart from that, enjoying the delicious moon cake, which is round and symbolizes reunion, is also a must.句中动名词作主语。
假定你是高中生李华，你班将于中秋节当晚举行户外中秋晚会，请你写函邀请你们的外教Mary参加。要点如下：
1.通知时间和地点；
2.简介中秋节的意义；
3.告知当晚具体活动。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mary,
I’m Li Hua from class 1. Our class are planning a Mid-Autumn outdoor evening party for students and teachers to develop friendship and experience traditional Chinese culture, and we feel it would be great if you could participate in it.
The Mid-Autumn festival, which provides a time for families and friends to be together, is considered of great significance in China. In the party, we are going to appreciate the fullest and most charming moon. Apart from that, enjoying the delicious moon cake, which is round and symbolizes reunion, is also a must.
Please bear in mind that the party will be held at 8 o’clock next Sunday evening in the open air in front of the teaching building. Looking forward to your coming and sharing a beautiful night with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求写一封邀请函。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邀请函：假定你是高中生李华，你班将于中秋节当晚举行户外中秋晚会，请你写函邀请你们的外教Mary参加。要点如下：1.通知时间和地点；2.简介中秋节的意义；3.告知当晚具体活动。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a Mid-Autumn outdoor evening party（户外中秋晚会）；to develop friendship and experience traditional Chinese culture（发展友谊，体验中国传统文化）；The Mid-Autumn festival（中秋节）；in front of the teaching building（在教学楼前）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。and we feel it would be great if you could participate in it.句中if引导条件状语从句；The Mid-Autumn festival, which provides a time for families and friends to be together, is considered of great significance in China.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；Apart from that, enjoying the delicious moon cake, which is round and symbolizes reunion, is also a must.句中动名词作主语。
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