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书面表达 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友peter即将作为交换生来你校学习,他来信询问你校学生社团(association)活动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:

英语作文范文 02-24
书面表达
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友peter即将作为交换生来你校学习,他来信询问你校学生社团(association)活动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:
1.学校师生对社团活动的态度;
2. 主要的学生社团;
3.你参加的学生社团。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Peter,
__________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
范文】Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your letter about the associations in our school and the following information may give you a rough outline.
To begin with, both teachers and leaders in our school are in favour of student associations, thinking they are an important part of education. Of course, the students are interested in activities of all kinds. As a result, associations for different purposes have been formed, among which basketball; football and dancing enjoy great popularity. Even there is one whose main activity is to recycle waste paper and plastic bottles. As for me, I am addicted to running since it has been giving me strength to face the challenges in life.
I believe you will find one appropriate to you. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
李华的英国朋友peter即将作为交换生来你校学习,他来信询问你校学生社团(association)活动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校师生对社团活动的态度;2.主要的学生社团; 3.你参加的学生社团。
【详解】第一步:根据提示可知,本文是一封给朋友的回信。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. give you a rough outline, in favour of, for different purposes, be addicted to, appropriate, Looking forward to.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句among which basketball; football and dancing enjoy great popularity.和whose main activity is to recycle waste paper and plastic bottles.宾语从句you will find one appropriate to you.全文中没有中国式英语句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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