书面表达 假如你是晨光中学的学生李华, 你在互联网上看到关于加拿大Columbia International College将举办冬令营的计划及课程安排的信息，你很感兴趣。
英语作文范文 02-24
书面表达
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华, 你在互联网上看到关于加拿大Columbia International College将举办冬令营的计划及课程安排的信息，你很感兴趣。现在请你根据以下提示给该学院的Christine写一封信咨询相关情况。
1.询问内容（课程安排、报名方式、费用等）；
2. 期望得到的收获（如：提高口语、了解其它国家文化等）；
3. 索要相关材料（申请表等）；
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇 冬令营 winter camp 申请表 application form
Dear Ms. Christine,
I am Li Hua, a student studying in Chenguang Middle School.
______________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Ms. Christine,
I am Li Hua, a student studying in Chenguang Middle School. I have learned from the Internet that a Winter Camp is going to be held in your college soon, which interests me very much, so I’m writing to inquire about several questions concerned.
To start with, I’d like to get some details of the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Additionally, I was wondering how I can take part in it and what is also my concern is the expenses I should pay. I consider the Winter Camp an ideal chance to have my oral English improved and have a better understanding of different countries with different cultures as well. Could you be so kind as to send me an application form and some relevant materials on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for your kindness, and your immediate attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是晨光中学的学生李华, 你在互联网上看到关于加拿大Columbia International College将举办冬令营的计划及课程安排的信息，你很感兴趣。现在请你根据以下提示给该学院的Christine写一封信咨询相关情况。1.询问内容（课程安排、报名方式、费用等）；2. 期望得到的收获（如：提高口语、了解其它国家文化等）；3. 索要相关材料（申请表等）；
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Winter Camp (冬令营)；inquire about (询问)；in all (总共)；application form(申请表)；have a better understanding of(更好理解)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I have learned from the Internet that a is going to be held in your college soon, which interests me very much, so I’m writing to inquire about several questions concerned.运用了宾语从句和非限定性定语从句；Additionally, I was wondering how I can take part in it and what is also my concern is the expenses I should pay.运用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华, 你在互联网上看到关于加拿大Columbia International College将举办冬令营的计划及课程安排的信息，你很感兴趣。现在请你根据以下提示给该学院的Christine写一封信咨询相关情况。
1.询问内容（课程安排、报名方式、费用等）；
2. 期望得到的收获（如：提高口语、了解其它国家文化等）；
3. 索要相关材料（申请表等）；
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇 冬令营 winter camp 申请表 application form
Dear Ms. Christine,
I am Li Hua, a student studying in Chenguang Middle School.
______________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Ms. Christine,
I am Li Hua, a student studying in Chenguang Middle School. I have learned from the Internet that a Winter Camp is going to be held in your college soon, which interests me very much, so I’m writing to inquire about several questions concerned.
To start with, I’d like to get some details of the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Additionally, I was wondering how I can take part in it and what is also my concern is the expenses I should pay. I consider the Winter Camp an ideal chance to have my oral English improved and have a better understanding of different countries with different cultures as well. Could you be so kind as to send me an application form and some relevant materials on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for your kindness, and your immediate attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是晨光中学的学生李华, 你在互联网上看到关于加拿大Columbia International College将举办冬令营的计划及课程安排的信息，你很感兴趣。现在请你根据以下提示给该学院的Christine写一封信咨询相关情况。1.询问内容（课程安排、报名方式、费用等）；2. 期望得到的收获（如：提高口语、了解其它国家文化等）；3. 索要相关材料（申请表等）；
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Winter Camp (冬令营)；inquire about (询问)；in all (总共)；application form(申请表)；have a better understanding of(更好理解)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I have learned from the Internet that a is going to be held in your college soon, which interests me very much, so I’m writing to inquire about several questions concerned.运用了宾语从句和非限定性定语从句；Additionally, I was wondering how I can take part in it and what is also my concern is the expenses I should pay.运用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
苏19057182-3号