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假设你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与 Peter几天前产生了误会。Tom的生日即将来临, Peter想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Peter回一封邮件。
1、礼物选择；2、你的理由；3、其他建议。
注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Tom. If I were you. I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Tom is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body, in the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It's convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling seeing a movie having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important I hope that we can be friends forever.
Best Wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文，写一篇邮件。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文。根据题干可知：假如你是李华，你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，并特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。要求你给Tom回一封邮件，要点包括：1．礼物选择：2．你的理由；3．其它和解建议。
同时要注意以下几点：
1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。
2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。
3.注意语气。既然这是一封建议信，应该委婉地提出自己的建议，并表示两个朋友可以早日和好。
【点睛】范文中运用一些常见的短语As far as I know据我所知；build up增强；it is convenient for sb to do 做某事对于某人来说是很便利的；In the meanwhile与此同时；Apart from除了；If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him 这个句子运用到对现在的虚拟；In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句，代指上面这件事；No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. 这句话中no matter what引导让步状语从句，还运用到动名词做主语。
假设你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与 Peter几天前产生了误会。Tom的生日即将来临, Peter想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Peter回一封邮件。
1、礼物选择；2、你的理由；3、其他建议。
注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Tom. If I were you. I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Tom is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body, in the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It's convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling seeing a movie having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important I hope that we can be friends forever.
Best Wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文，写一篇邮件。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文。根据题干可知：假如你是李华，你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，并特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。要求你给Tom回一封邮件，要点包括：1．礼物选择：2．你的理由；3．其它和解建议。
同时要注意以下几点：
1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。
2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。
3.注意语气。既然这是一封建议信，应该委婉地提出自己的建议，并表示两个朋友可以早日和好。
【点睛】范文中运用一些常见的短语As far as I know据我所知；build up增强；it is convenient for sb to do 做某事对于某人来说是很便利的；In the meanwhile与此同时；Apart from除了；If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him 这个句子运用到对现在的虚拟；In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句，代指上面这件事；No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. 这句话中no matter what引导让步状语从句，还运用到动名词做主语。
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