书面表达 假设你是李华，你校来自美国的交换生Jack将于12月份去北京参加中文演讲比赛决赛。他就如何准备比赛向你写信求助，现在请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件给他帮助: 1. 向他表示祝贺；
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书面表达
假设你是李华，你校来自美国的交换生Jack将于12月份去北京参加中文演讲比赛决赛。他就如何准备比赛向你写信求助，现在请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件给他帮助:
1. 向他表示祝贺；
2. 给他提出建议；
3. 给他鼓励并祝他取得好成绩。
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节使行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
决赛:final
Dear Jack,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jack，
You couldn't imagine how delighted I was when I got the news that you have successfully won the opportunity to compete in the final of the Chinese Speech Contest. Congratulations!
Now I am writing to give you some suggestions about the final. What comes to my mind first is that you should choose a proper topic so that you are more likely to impress the judges deeply. Besides, after finishing your writing, if you could turn to your Chinese teacher to ask him to polish it, it would be much better. Last but not least, I strongly suggest you paying special attention to your voice and gesture during your speech.
I hope and do believe that you can win the final. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Congratulations to you on entering the final of the Chinese Speech Contest! I'm really happy to hear the exciting news!
Now I'd like to give you some advice on how to prepare for the contest. Firstly, you should choose a proper topic to give the judge a good impression. When you finish writing the speech, you'd better ask your Chinese teacher to help you correct it. He will give you some suggestions on the words and sentences you use. Finally, I think it is necessary to pay attention to your voice and gesture when delivering the speech.
I believe you can make it. Wish you a great success!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李华的名义给美国的交换生Jack写一封电子邮件。
【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求是假设你是李华，你校来自美国的交换生Jack将于12月份去北京参加中文演讲比赛决赛。他就如何准备比赛向你写信求助，现在请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件给他帮助：1. 向他表示祝贺；2. 给他提出建议；3. 给他鼓励并祝他取得好成绩。
其次选用正确的时态，然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一简较好的范文。这简短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：compete in，Last but not least，pay attention to，make it。还使用了名词性从句What comes to my mind first is that you should choose a proper topic so that you are more likely to impress the judges deeply.和非谓语动词作状语Besides, after finishing your writing, if you could turn to your Chinese teacher to ask him to polish it, it would be much better.和定语从句He will give you some suggestions on the words and sentences you use.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。
假设你是李华，你校来自美国的交换生Jack将于12月份去北京参加中文演讲比赛决赛。他就如何准备比赛向你写信求助，现在请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件给他帮助:
1. 向他表示祝贺；
2. 给他提出建议；
3. 给他鼓励并祝他取得好成绩。
注意:
1. 词数:100词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节使行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
决赛:final
Dear Jack,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jack，
You couldn't imagine how delighted I was when I got the news that you have successfully won the opportunity to compete in the final of the Chinese Speech Contest. Congratulations!
Now I am writing to give you some suggestions about the final. What comes to my mind first is that you should choose a proper topic so that you are more likely to impress the judges deeply. Besides, after finishing your writing, if you could turn to your Chinese teacher to ask him to polish it, it would be much better. Last but not least, I strongly suggest you paying special attention to your voice and gesture during your speech.
I hope and do believe that you can win the final. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Congratulations to you on entering the final of the Chinese Speech Contest! I'm really happy to hear the exciting news!
Now I'd like to give you some advice on how to prepare for the contest. Firstly, you should choose a proper topic to give the judge a good impression. When you finish writing the speech, you'd better ask your Chinese teacher to help you correct it. He will give you some suggestions on the words and sentences you use. Finally, I think it is necessary to pay attention to your voice and gesture when delivering the speech.
I believe you can make it. Wish you a great success!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李华的名义给美国的交换生Jack写一封电子邮件。
【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求是假设你是李华，你校来自美国的交换生Jack将于12月份去北京参加中文演讲比赛决赛。他就如何准备比赛向你写信求助，现在请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件给他帮助：1. 向他表示祝贺；2. 给他提出建议；3. 给他鼓励并祝他取得好成绩。
其次选用正确的时态，然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一简较好的范文。这简短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：compete in，Last but not least，pay attention to，make it。还使用了名词性从句What comes to my mind first is that you should choose a proper topic so that you are more likely to impress the judges deeply.和非谓语动词作状语Besides, after finishing your writing, if you could turn to your Chinese teacher to ask him to polish it, it would be much better.和定语从句He will give you some suggestions on the words and sentences you use.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。
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