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假设你是李华,你参加了某旅行社组织的一次旅游,你对其中的某些服务不满意。所以,你想就此事给该旅行社写一封投诉信。

英语作文范文 02-28
假设你是李华,你参加了某旅行社组织的一次旅游,你对其中的某些服务不满意。所以,你想就此事给该旅行社写一封投诉信。
内容包括:1.写信目的;2.不满之处;3.表达期望。
注意:  1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Madam / Sir,
    My name is Li Hua, who is a customer of your travel agency._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文为应用文中的书信,要求以李华的身份给旅行社写投诉信。要使用第一人称,因为叙述的是过去发生的事情,所以主体时态的一般过去时。文章要点:1.写信的目的,写信表达对旅行社提供服务的不满。2.具体内容导游带领游客购物太多,真正旅游时间很少,导游的专业知识不够,对景点不够了解, 而且对游客粗鲁。用餐情况糟糕,住宿宾馆条件差。3.希望能够得到公司的回应,希望旅行社提高服务质量。 建议文章分为三段,第1段说明目的,第2段阐述不满之处,第3段表达希望。
范文
Dear Madam or Sir,
My name is Li Hua, who is the customer of your travel agency. Here I'm sorry to express my dissatisfaction with the service of the travel agency. 
First of all, during the trip, the tour guide not only introduced too many activities at our own expense but also took us to so many different places to do shopping, which occupied much time. Besides, I do not think the guide is competent enough because he had no good knowledge of the scenic spots and was rude to us. What's worse, the food served was of poor quality and the car accommodation conditions were awful.
Hopefully you can take all the above into careful consideration and also take some measures to improve your service.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
首先本篇范文高级句子应用较多,如: My name is Li Hua, who is the customer of your travel agency. 非限制性定语从句; First of all, during the trip, the tour guide not only introduced too many activities at our own expense but also took us to so many different places to do shopping, which occupied much time. 运用便利性和非限定性定语从句。另外范文中还运用了一些好的短语,如of poor quality和take sth. Into consideration以及take measures to do sh.等。这些短语句式的运用,让文章成为一篇出色的范文
 
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