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假如你是高三学生李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信。 内容如下: 取得成就的原因;

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假如你是高三学生李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信。
内容如下:
  1. 取得成就的原因;
  2. 继续努力;
  3. 希望见面和交流。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:“汉语桥”Chinese Bridge, “中文演讲比赛”Chinese speech contest被剑桥大学(University of Cambridge)录取,请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下:
1.向Reed表示祝贺;
2.介绍自己目前的学习情况;
3.请教学习方法
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
Dear Reed,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文只是给出了主要写作要点,写作中要注意从三个面进行叙述,并自己补充一到两点,动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,关键词等问题,注意不要遗漏要点,做到语句通顺,写作中注意使用连接词、序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
范文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going with you recently? I am more than delighted to hear that you won the first prize of “Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your achievement.
As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success. In the past few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Chinese every day, because of which you made great progress. But in order to achieve more in your study and embrace a better future in your life, you’ d better go on studying Chinese harder. Eventually, would you tell me when it’s convenient for you?I feel like seeing you and communicating with you.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
亮点句型一:it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success.运用了强调句式;亮点句型二:In the past few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Chinese every day, because of which you made great progress.运用了非限定性定语从句。
 
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