书面表达 假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim要来中国学习和生活。为了帮助他尽快适应，请为他推荐一款手机app(如WeChat, Alipay, Baidu Map等)。内容包括:
英语作文范文 03-02
书面表达
假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim要来中国学习和生活。为了帮助他尽快适应，请为他推荐一款手机app(如WeChat, Alipay, Baidu Map等)。内容包括:
1. 欢迎他来中国；
2. 推荐一款手机app；
3. 推荐的理由。
注意: 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jim,
I’m so delighted to know you’re coming to study and live in China. I’d like to extend my warm welcome to you! To help you adapt to the new life here, I’d highly recommend you a super popular app—WeChat.
As a multi-functional social media app, WeChat can be found on almost every Chinese mobile phone. You can post photos on WeChat Moments about your life or repost interesting stories and give Likes to your friends’ Moments as well.
Apart from socializing, you can pay for almost anything with WeChat, from online shopping to booking services. All you need to do is show your WeChat payment code or just use the scan function. You don’t need to carry any paper money. What a relief!
WeChat is such a convenient and efficient tool that I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me. I’m looking forward to hearing about your experience with WeChat. And I hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语为Jim推荐一款手机app。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要求：包含以下内容：1. 欢迎他来中国；
2. 推荐一款手机app；
3. 推荐的理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be delighted to；extend；adapt to；highly recommend；social media；repost; service; code; function; carry; relief; convenient; fall in love with; looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m so delighted to know you’re coming to study and live in China.
2.I’d like to extend my warm welcome to you! To help you adapt to the new life here, I’d highly recommend you a super popular app—WeChat.
3.As a multi-functional social media app, WeChat can be found on almost every Chinese mobile phone.
4.You can post photos on WeChat Moments about your life or repost interesting stories and give Likes to your friends’ Moments as well.
5.Apart from socializing, you can pay for almost anything with WeChat, from online shopping to booking services.
6.All you need to do is show your WeChat payment code or just use the scan function.
7.You don’t need to carry any paper money.
8.What a relief!
9.WeChat is such a convenient and efficient tool that I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
10.If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
11.I’m looking forward to hearing about your experience with WeChat.
12.And I hope you’ll have a good time in China.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“apart from，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“adapt to；relief; convenient; fall in love with; looking forward to”以及宾语从句、定语从句和状语从句等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim要来中国学习和生活。为了帮助他尽快适应，请为他推荐一款手机app(如WeChat, Alipay, Baidu Map等)。内容包括:
1. 欢迎他来中国；
2. 推荐一款手机app；
3. 推荐的理由。
注意: 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jim,
I’m so delighted to know you’re coming to study and live in China. I’d like to extend my warm welcome to you! To help you adapt to the new life here, I’d highly recommend you a super popular app—WeChat.
As a multi-functional social media app, WeChat can be found on almost every Chinese mobile phone. You can post photos on WeChat Moments about your life or repost interesting stories and give Likes to your friends’ Moments as well.
Apart from socializing, you can pay for almost anything with WeChat, from online shopping to booking services. All you need to do is show your WeChat payment code or just use the scan function. You don’t need to carry any paper money. What a relief!
WeChat is such a convenient and efficient tool that I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me. I’m looking forward to hearing about your experience with WeChat. And I hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语为Jim推荐一款手机app。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要求：包含以下内容：1. 欢迎他来中国；
2. 推荐一款手机app；
3. 推荐的理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be delighted to；extend；adapt to；highly recommend；social media；repost; service; code; function; carry; relief; convenient; fall in love with; looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m so delighted to know you’re coming to study and live in China.
2.I’d like to extend my warm welcome to you! To help you adapt to the new life here, I’d highly recommend you a super popular app—WeChat.
3.As a multi-functional social media app, WeChat can be found on almost every Chinese mobile phone.
4.You can post photos on WeChat Moments about your life or repost interesting stories and give Likes to your friends’ Moments as well.
5.Apart from socializing, you can pay for almost anything with WeChat, from online shopping to booking services.
6.All you need to do is show your WeChat payment code or just use the scan function.
7.You don’t need to carry any paper money.
8.What a relief!
9.WeChat is such a convenient and efficient tool that I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
10.If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
11.I’m looking forward to hearing about your experience with WeChat.
12.And I hope you’ll have a good time in China.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“apart from，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“adapt to；relief; convenient; fall in love with; looking forward to”以及宾语从句、定语从句和状语从句等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
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