书面表达 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国节日感兴趣。他得知我国越来越注重自己的传统节日，如清明节和端午节，并且政府规定这些节日各放假一天。但Tom担心这会给封建迷信的传播提供机会。请就此给To
英语作文范文 03-02
书面表达
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国节日感兴趣。他得知我国越来越注重自己的传统节日，如清明节和端午节，并且政府规定这些节日各放假一天。但Tom担心这会给封建迷信的传播提供机会。请就此给Tom写一封回信，论述自己的观点。信的开头和结尾已给出。
参考词语：清明节 the Tomb-sweeping Day 端午节 the Dragon Boat Festival
迷信 superstition
Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to know that you are interested in Chinese festivals in your last letter.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to know that you are interested in Chinese festivals in your last letter. Nowadays both the government and people are beginning to realize that the traditional festivals should be highly observed.
On the Tomb-sweeping Day and the Dragon Boat Festival, people can enjoy a one-day holiday according to the government rules. In addition, some interesting and instructive activities will be held, from which people can learn a lot about the festivals. However, it may help to spread superstition, which will be an obstacle to the development of science and technology. As far as I’m concerned, these traditional festivals should be paid more attention to and celebrated in a proper way. Only by doing this, can their meanings be better understood and our culture be well passed on and developed.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，按照要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国节日感兴趣。他得知我国越来越注重自己的传统节日，如清明节和端午节，并且政府规定这些节日各放假一天。但Tom担心这会给封建迷信的传播提供机会。请就此给Tom写一封回信，论述自己的观点。人称为第一人称和第三人称为主。时态以一般现在时为主。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，引入话题。第二段，中心内容—阐述自己观点。第三段，总结。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: observe庆祝；instructive指导性的；obstacle障碍；be interested in感兴趣；in addition此外；as far as I’m concerned就我而言；pay attention to注意; pass on
传递等。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接；注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了一些亮点短语：observe庆祝；instructive指导性的；obstacle障碍；be interested in感兴趣；in addition此外；as far as I’m concerned就我而言；pay attention to注意; pass on传递等。
以及一些较为高级的句式: Nowadays both the government and people are beginning to realize that the traditional festivals should be highly observed. 使用了宾语从句； In addition, some interesting and instructive activities will be held, from which people can learn a lot about the festivals. 使用了非限制性定语从句；Only by doing this, can their meanings be better understood and our culture be well passed on and developed.使用了倒装句。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国节日感兴趣。他得知我国越来越注重自己的传统节日，如清明节和端午节，并且政府规定这些节日各放假一天。但Tom担心这会给封建迷信的传播提供机会。请就此给Tom写一封回信，论述自己的观点。信的开头和结尾已给出。
参考词语：清明节 the Tomb-sweeping Day 端午节 the Dragon Boat Festival
迷信 superstition
Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to know that you are interested in Chinese festivals in your last letter.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to know that you are interested in Chinese festivals in your last letter. Nowadays both the government and people are beginning to realize that the traditional festivals should be highly observed.
On the Tomb-sweeping Day and the Dragon Boat Festival, people can enjoy a one-day holiday according to the government rules. In addition, some interesting and instructive activities will be held, from which people can learn a lot about the festivals. However, it may help to spread superstition, which will be an obstacle to the development of science and technology. As far as I’m concerned, these traditional festivals should be paid more attention to and celebrated in a proper way. Only by doing this, can their meanings be better understood and our culture be well passed on and developed.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，按照要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国节日感兴趣。他得知我国越来越注重自己的传统节日，如清明节和端午节，并且政府规定这些节日各放假一天。但Tom担心这会给封建迷信的传播提供机会。请就此给Tom写一封回信，论述自己的观点。人称为第一人称和第三人称为主。时态以一般现在时为主。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，引入话题。第二段，中心内容—阐述自己观点。第三段，总结。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: observe庆祝；instructive指导性的；obstacle障碍；be interested in感兴趣；in addition此外；as far as I’m concerned就我而言；pay attention to注意; pass on
传递等。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接；注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了一些亮点短语：observe庆祝；instructive指导性的；obstacle障碍；be interested in感兴趣；in addition此外；as far as I’m concerned就我而言；pay attention to注意; pass on传递等。
以及一些较为高级的句式: Nowadays both the government and people are beginning to realize that the traditional festivals should be highly observed. 使用了宾语从句； In addition, some interesting and instructive activities will be held, from which people can learn a lot about the festivals. 使用了非限制性定语从句；Only by doing this, can their meanings be better understood and our culture be well passed on and developed.使用了倒装句。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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