书面表达
假定你是李华，今年暑假一批英国学生到你校参观并游览你所在的城市，学校需要一批志愿者作为导游，你准备应聘。请根据以下提示，写一封申请信。
1. 申请缘由；
2. 你的优势；
3. 旅游建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】Dear sir or madam,
Having been informed that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation, I feel it an honor to be one of the guides to offer them a pleasant trip, and that’s why I am writing to apply for it.
First of all, I have a good command of English and can speak it fluently, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with them in English. Besides, I am an open-minded boy and fond of making friends, thus equipping myself with good qualities that a guide calls for. Above all, being a native of the city, I know a lot about its history and culture. Meanwhile, they will get my suggestions on how to get around the city and recommendations on some scenic spots of historical significance, promising the journey an unforgettable memory for the British students.
If given the chance to be a guide, I will spare no efforts to do everything I can. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，申请作为英国学生的志愿者导游。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.写信目的以及申请理由。（apply for it）
2.介绍优势和建议
1）英语娴熟（have a good command of）
2）性格开朗（open-minded）
3）旅游建议(recommendation)
3.寒暄结束（look forward to）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have a good command of; communicate with; be fond of; equip sb. with; get around; spare no efforts; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. First of all, I have a good command of English and can speak it fluently, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with them in English.
2. Besides, I am an open-minded boy and fond of making friends, thus equipping myself with good qualities that a guide calls for.
3. Meanwhile, they will get my suggestions on how to get around the city and recommendations on some scenic spots of historical significance, promising the journey an unforgettable memory for the British students.
4. If given the chance to be a guide, I will spare no efforts to do everything I can.
5.Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end
2.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
1)Having been informed that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation, I feel it an honor to be one of the guides to offer them a pleasant trip, and that’s why I am writing to apply for it. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句“that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation”，同时运用了非谓语结构“Having been informed that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation”作状语。
2)First of all, I have a good command of English and can speak it fluently, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with them in English.句中使用了非限制定语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如have a good command of; communicate with; be fond of; equip sb. with; get around; spare no efforts; look forward to等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，今年暑假一批英国学生到你校参观并游览你所在的城市，学校需要一批志愿者作为导游，你准备应聘。请根据以下提示，写一封申请信。
1. 申请缘由；
2. 你的优势；
3. 旅游建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】Dear sir or madam,
Having been informed that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation, I feel it an honor to be one of the guides to offer them a pleasant trip, and that’s why I am writing to apply for it.
First of all, I have a good command of English and can speak it fluently, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with them in English. Besides, I am an open-minded boy and fond of making friends, thus equipping myself with good qualities that a guide calls for. Above all, being a native of the city, I know a lot about its history and culture. Meanwhile, they will get my suggestions on how to get around the city and recommendations on some scenic spots of historical significance, promising the journey an unforgettable memory for the British students.
If given the chance to be a guide, I will spare no efforts to do everything I can. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，申请作为英国学生的志愿者导游。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.写信目的以及申请理由。（apply for it）
2.介绍优势和建议
1）英语娴熟（have a good command of）
2）性格开朗（open-minded）
3）旅游建议(recommendation)
3.寒暄结束（look forward to）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have a good command of; communicate with; be fond of; equip sb. with; get around; spare no efforts; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. First of all, I have a good command of English and can speak it fluently, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with them in English.
2. Besides, I am an open-minded boy and fond of making friends, thus equipping myself with good qualities that a guide calls for.
3. Meanwhile, they will get my suggestions on how to get around the city and recommendations on some scenic spots of historical significance, promising the journey an unforgettable memory for the British students.
4. If given the chance to be a guide, I will spare no efforts to do everything I can.
5.Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end
2.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
1)Having been informed that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation, I feel it an honor to be one of the guides to offer them a pleasant trip, and that’s why I am writing to apply for it. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句“that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation”，同时运用了非谓语结构“Having been informed that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation”作状语。
2)First of all, I have a good command of English and can speak it fluently, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with them in English.句中使用了非限制定语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如have a good command of; communicate with; be fond of; equip sb. with; get around; spare no efforts; look forward to等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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