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假如你叫Lingling,你的一个英国笔友Lucy在中国做交换生，她下周打算去拜访一个中 国朋友.现向你请教一些中国的拜访及餐桌礼仪。请你根据以下中文要点提示，用英语给她写一封电子邮件，告诉她-些要注意的事项。
要点提示:
1.拜访礼仪:提前打电话;携带小礼物;……
2.餐桌礼仪:餐前等候;……
要求：
1.必须包含全部要点提示；
2.另提出自己所了解的相关礼仪（至少一点）；
3.80词左右。（邮件开头已给出，不计入词数）
【范文】
Dear Lucy,
You must be very excited to visit a Chinese friend. You said that you wanted to know some customs in China. Here I'd like to tell you some customs and basic manners, which may help you enjoy your stay in China.
Call ahead of time if you want to visit your friend. And don't forget to take a small gift, such as some flowers.
Before the meal, wait till everyone is at the table. Don, t use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl or speak with your mouth full of food.
After the meal, it,'s polite to say thanks for the meal. If you know the manners, I think you'll enjoy yourself in China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lingling
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书信作文要求以Lingling的身份，用第一人称、一般现在时向英国的笔友介绍中国的餐桌礼仪；书写时要注意用全所给材料，适当发挥，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。书信第一层引入主题，第二层按照题干的提示，有条理地介绍“就餐前、就餐中、就餐后”的礼仪；文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文句式多样。书信以非限定性定语从句I'd like to tell you some customs and basic manners, which may help you enjoy your stay in China.引入主题；用条件状语从句“if you want to visit your friend.”；祈使句否定句“And don't forget to take a small gift”；时间状语从句“Before the meal, wait till everyone is at the table；After the meal, it's polite to say thanks for the meal”介绍就餐前、就餐中、就餐后的礼仪；文句精彩，行文通畅。
【点睛】本篇为书信作文，用第一人称、一般现在时，书写时要注意书信的格式和问候语，以得体的语言引入正文；正文部分介绍餐桌礼仪要有条理地按照题干的提示“拜访礼仪
餐桌礼仪 ”展开。
假如你叫Lingling,你的一个英国笔友Lucy在中国做交换生，她下周打算去拜访一个中 国朋友.现向你请教一些中国的拜访及餐桌礼仪。请你根据以下中文要点提示，用英语给她写一封电子邮件，告诉她-些要注意的事项。
要点提示:
1.拜访礼仪:提前打电话;携带小礼物;……
2.餐桌礼仪:餐前等候;……
要求：
1.必须包含全部要点提示；
2.另提出自己所了解的相关礼仪（至少一点）；
3.80词左右。（邮件开头已给出，不计入词数）
【范文】
Dear Lucy,
You must be very excited to visit a Chinese friend. You said that you wanted to know some customs in China. Here I'd like to tell you some customs and basic manners, which may help you enjoy your stay in China.
Call ahead of time if you want to visit your friend. And don't forget to take a small gift, such as some flowers.
Before the meal, wait till everyone is at the table. Don, t use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl or speak with your mouth full of food.
After the meal, it,'s polite to say thanks for the meal. If you know the manners, I think you'll enjoy yourself in China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lingling
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书信作文要求以Lingling的身份，用第一人称、一般现在时向英国的笔友介绍中国的餐桌礼仪；书写时要注意用全所给材料，适当发挥，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。书信第一层引入主题，第二层按照题干的提示，有条理地介绍“就餐前、就餐中、就餐后”的礼仪；文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文句式多样。书信以非限定性定语从句I'd like to tell you some customs and basic manners, which may help you enjoy your stay in China.引入主题；用条件状语从句“if you want to visit your friend.”；祈使句否定句“And don't forget to take a small gift”；时间状语从句“Before the meal, wait till everyone is at the table；After the meal, it's polite to say thanks for the meal”介绍就餐前、就餐中、就餐后的礼仪；文句精彩，行文通畅。
【点睛】本篇为书信作文，用第一人称、一般现在时，书写时要注意书信的格式和问候语，以得体的语言引入正文；正文部分介绍餐桌礼仪要有条理地按照题干的提示“拜访礼仪
餐桌礼仪 ”展开。
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