读后续写I hurried into the local department store to grab some last-minute Christmas gifts.
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I hurried into the local department store to grab some last-minute Christmas gifts. Christmas was beginning to become such a drag. I wished that I could just sleep through Christmas.
There I saw a little boy about 5 holding a beautiful doll. He kept touching her hair and he held her so gently, but money seemed a problem. I couldn’t help asking the boy who the doll was for. He said, “It is the doll my sister wanted so badly for Christmas. She just knew that Santa would bring it.” I told him that maybe Santa was going to bring it. He said, “No, Santa can’t go where my sister is. I have to give the doll to my momma and she will take it to her.” I asked him where his sister was. He looked at me with the saddest eyes and said, “She has gone to be with Jesus. My daddy says that Momma is going to be with her.” That meant his mother was in serious condition.
My heart nearly stopped beating the instant I heard what he said. Then the boy said, “I told my daddy to tell Momma to wait till I got back from the store.” Then he asked me to see his picture.“I want my momma to take this with her so she won’t forget me.” I saw that the little boy lowered his head, very quiet. When counting money for him, I slipped a handful of my bills in with his while he was not looking. Of course it was plenty for the doll. Then the boy became excited and said, “I can afford to buy a rose for my momma, too. She loves white roses very much.”
In a few minutes I wheeled my cart away—I left there in tears. I could not keep from thinking about the little boy as I finished my shopping in a totally different spirit than when I had started.
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And I kept remembering a story I had seen in the newspaper several days earlier.
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Two days later I learned from the paper that the young woman had died.
答案
One possible version:
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And I kept remembering a story I had seen in the newspaper several days earlier. That was about a serious traffic accident, which was caused by a drunken driver. It was due wholly to the drunken driver who was not in control of his car when it hit another car, in which there was a little girl and her mother—a female driver. The little girl was then killed, and her mother was in serious condition. But in fact, the two victims were the little boy’s sister and mother.
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Two days later I learned from the paper that the young woman had died. So I found out the address of the unhappy family and further detailed information by contacting the editorial department. What I could do was that I bought some white roses with a heavy heart. And I wanted to take them to attend the funeral of the young lady. The moment I entered the hall, I saw the little boy sobbing beside his mother lying in the crystal coffin with her hand holding a lovely white rose and a beautiful doll. With deep grief, I left there in tears.
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I hurried into the local department store to grab some last-minute Christmas gifts. Christmas was beginning to become such a drag. I wished that I could just sleep through Christmas.
There I saw a little boy about 5 holding a beautiful doll. He kept touching her hair and he held her so gently, but money seemed a problem. I couldn’t help asking the boy who the doll was for. He said, “It is the doll my sister wanted so badly for Christmas. She just knew that Santa would bring it.” I told him that maybe Santa was going to bring it. He said, “No, Santa can’t go where my sister is. I have to give the doll to my momma and she will take it to her.” I asked him where his sister was. He looked at me with the saddest eyes and said, “She has gone to be with Jesus. My daddy says that Momma is going to be with her.” That meant his mother was in serious condition.
My heart nearly stopped beating the instant I heard what he said. Then the boy said, “I told my daddy to tell Momma to wait till I got back from the store.” Then he asked me to see his picture.“I want my momma to take this with her so she won’t forget me.” I saw that the little boy lowered his head, very quiet. When counting money for him, I slipped a handful of my bills in with his while he was not looking. Of course it was plenty for the doll. Then the boy became excited and said, “I can afford to buy a rose for my momma, too. She loves white roses very much.”
In a few minutes I wheeled my cart away—I left there in tears. I could not keep from thinking about the little boy as I finished my shopping in a totally different spirit than when I had started.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
And I kept remembering a story I had seen in the newspaper several days earlier.
Paragraph 2:
Two days later I learned from the paper that the young woman had died.
答案
One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
And I kept remembering a story I had seen in the newspaper several days earlier. That was about a serious traffic accident, which was caused by a drunken driver. It was due wholly to the drunken driver who was not in control of his car when it hit another car, in which there was a little girl and her mother—a female driver. The little girl was then killed, and her mother was in serious condition. But in fact, the two victims were the little boy’s sister and mother.
Paragraph 2:
Two days later I learned from the paper that the young woman had died. So I found out the address of the unhappy family and further detailed information by contacting the editorial department. What I could do was that I bought some white roses with a heavy heart. And I wanted to take them to attend the funeral of the young lady. The moment I entered the hall, I saw the little boy sobbing beside his mother lying in the crystal coffin with her hand holding a lovely white rose and a beautiful doll. With deep grief, I left there in tears.
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