书面表达假定你是李华，正在加拿大参加短期访问交流活动。你偶然在一本近期的

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假定你是李华，正在加拿大参加短期访问交流活动。你偶然在一本近期的杂志里看到一篇介绍中国端午节的文章，但文章里没有注明日期是中国农历，且文中所配图片是赛艇而不是龙舟。请你给编辑部写一封信，指出其中的错误并要求更正。内容包括:
(1) 指出错误， 给出正确信息；
(2) 要求更正；
(3) 赞赏对方介绍中国文化。
注意：(1) 词数100左右;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(3) 参考词汇：  赛艇 rowing boat
Dear Editor,
……                                                                                    
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Yours sincerely,
                                                                               Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拔】
本文给编辑部写一封信，指出其介绍中国端午节的文章的错误并要求更正。写作时，一定要包含所给的3个要点，不要逐句翻译，并做适当扩展。人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。首先点题，直接说明写信的目的。然后按所给要点具体说明错误是什么，要求给出正确信息并给予更正，赞赏对方介绍中国文化。最后感谢对方的努力。
【亮点词汇】
1. point out指出
2. around the world全世界
3. bridge the gap缩小差距
【高级句型】
1. Also, we compete with dragon boats, where there is always a dragon head at the front, but not rowing boats.（where引导的非限制性定语从句）
2. To correct the mistakes may be constructive and thus readers can acquire right information about China. （用不定式表示目的）   
Dear editor,
I am writing to point out to you some of the mistakes in your recent issue about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival.
The Chinese Dragon Boat Festival falls on May 5th in the Chinese Lunar Calendar, not the calendar used around the world. Also, we compete with dragon boats, where there is always a dragon head at the front, but not rowing boats. To correct the mistakes may be constructive and thus readers can acquire right information about China. However, I quite appreciate your effort to introduce Chinese culture to your people, which will surely bridge the gap between our countries.
Thank you for your efforts. Wish you all the best!
Yours sincerely,
                                                                               Li Hua