改错 In order to help us students to keep fit and promote wills, our school organize a mountain
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In order to help us students to keep fit and promote wills, our school organize a mountain-climbing on Aprial 10 and we recieved much fun and benefit.
It was nice day, the sunlight warm and soft.At round 9 a.m., we gathered in the foot of Daqing
Mountain in high spirits, good-equipped for the tough journey to thedestination-the top of the mountaiin.
Despite the hardship, we were singing and laughing all the way, enjoy the the fresh air and the
beautiful views. When some students fall behind or got into trouble, others would come to their aid.
At around 11 a.m., we both arrived at thesummit of Daqing Mountain. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped
and cheered with greatly joy.
This outdoors activity is real impressive and beneficial. Not only did it got us closer to thenature and relieve pressure form us, it also promote the friendship among us.
答案
In order to help us students to keep fit and promote wills, our school organized a mountain-climbing on Aprial 10 and we recieved much fun and benefit.
It was a nice day, the sunlight warm and soft.At round 9 a.m., we gathered at the foot of Daqing
Mountain in high spirits, well-equipped for the tough journey to thedestination-the top of the mountaiin.
Despite the hardship, we were singing and laughing all the way, enjoying the the fresh air and the
beautiful views. When some students fell behind or got into trouble, others would come to their aid.
At around 11 a.m., we all arrived at thesummit of Daqing Mountain. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped
and cheered with great joy.
This outdoors activity is really impressive and beneficial. Not only did it get us closer to thenature and relieve pressure form us, it also promote the friendship among us.
In order to help us students to keep fit and promote wills, our school organize a mountain-climbing on Aprial 10 and we recieved much fun and benefit.
It was nice day, the sunlight warm and soft.At round 9 a.m., we gathered in the foot of Daqing
Mountain in high spirits, good-equipped for the tough journey to thedestination-the top of the mountaiin.
Despite the hardship, we were singing and laughing all the way, enjoy the the fresh air and the
beautiful views. When some students fall behind or got into trouble, others would come to their aid.
At around 11 a.m., we both arrived at thesummit of Daqing Mountain. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped
and cheered with greatly joy.
This outdoors activity is real impressive and beneficial. Not only did it got us closer to thenature and relieve pressure form us, it also promote the friendship among us.
答案
In order to help us students to keep fit and promote wills, our school organized a mountain-climbing on Aprial 10 and we recieved much fun and benefit.
It was a nice day, the sunlight warm and soft.At round 9 a.m., we gathered at the foot of Daqing
Mountain in high spirits, well-equipped for the tough journey to thedestination-the top of the mountaiin.
Despite the hardship, we were singing and laughing all the way, enjoying the the fresh air and the
beautiful views. When some students fell behind or got into trouble, others would come to their aid.
At around 11 a.m., we all arrived at thesummit of Daqing Mountain. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped
and cheered with great joy.
This outdoors activity is really impressive and beneficial. Not only did it get us closer to thenature and relieve pressure form us, it also promote the friendship among us.
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