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假定你是李华，近期去英国参加了一个为期三周的国际交流活动。期间，你被安排在怀特夫妇家中寄宿。现在，你已平安回国，请根据所给提示给怀特夫妇发一封电子邮件。
1. 感谢他们对你的照顾；
2 邀请他们来华旅游。
注意：1 词数100左右。
2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
______________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I have got back to my country safe and sound. Now I am writing to express my gratitude to you for your hospitality and kindness when I stayed in England.
As we know, it was so kind of you to take good care of me during my three-week stay in the UK, which left a deep impression on me. First and foremost, I still remember when I was not used to English food at the beginning, it was you who cooked some Chinese food for me, which moved me deeply. What’s more, not only did you tell me a lot about English culture and history, which broadened my horizons, but also by communicating with you ,my English has been greatly improved. Therefore, thanks to you, my trip to the UK has become a wonderful memory, which I will cherish forever.
If it is convenient for you, please come to China for a visit and it will be a great honor for me to show you around some places of interest, which will surely be a pleasant journey. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 假定你是李华，近期去英国参加了一个为期三周的国际交流活动。期间，你被安排在怀特夫妇家中寄宿。现在，你已平安回国，请根据所给提示给怀特夫妇发一封电子邮件。1. 感谢他们对你的照顾；2 邀请他们来华旅游。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如:安然无恙safe and sound;您的好客和善良 your hospitality and kindness;留下深刻印象 left a deep impression on; a great honor for me很荣幸； show you around带你逛逛等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句What’s more, not only did you tell me a lot about English culture and history, which broadened my horizons,;非谓语动词的运用Now I am writing to express my gratitude to you for your hospitality and kindness when I stayed in England..全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，近期去英国参加了一个为期三周的国际交流活动。期间，你被安排在怀特夫妇家中寄宿。现在，你已平安回国，请根据所给提示给怀特夫妇发一封电子邮件。
1. 感谢他们对你的照顾；
2 邀请他们来华旅游。
注意：1 词数100左右。
2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
______________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I have got back to my country safe and sound. Now I am writing to express my gratitude to you for your hospitality and kindness when I stayed in England.
As we know, it was so kind of you to take good care of me during my three-week stay in the UK, which left a deep impression on me. First and foremost, I still remember when I was not used to English food at the beginning, it was you who cooked some Chinese food for me, which moved me deeply. What’s more, not only did you tell me a lot about English culture and history, which broadened my horizons, but also by communicating with you ,my English has been greatly improved. Therefore, thanks to you, my trip to the UK has become a wonderful memory, which I will cherish forever.
If it is convenient for you, please come to China for a visit and it will be a great honor for me to show you around some places of interest, which will surely be a pleasant journey. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 假定你是李华，近期去英国参加了一个为期三周的国际交流活动。期间，你被安排在怀特夫妇家中寄宿。现在，你已平安回国，请根据所给提示给怀特夫妇发一封电子邮件。1. 感谢他们对你的照顾；2 邀请他们来华旅游。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如:安然无恙safe and sound;您的好客和善良 your hospitality and kindness;留下深刻印象 left a deep impression on; a great honor for me很荣幸； show you around带你逛逛等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句What’s more, not only did you tell me a lot about English culture and history, which broadened my horizons,;非谓语动词的运用Now I am writing to express my gratitude to you for your hospitality and kindness when I stayed in England..全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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