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书面表达。假定你是李华。你的爱尔兰网友Bob来信询问你今年春节假期的安排,

英语作文范文 04-19
书面表达(满分25 分)
假定你是李华。你的爱尔兰网友Bob来信询问你今年春节假期的安排,请你给他回信,要点如下:
1.你的学习计划;
2.你的其他计划(如社会实践);
3.询问Bob的寒假安排。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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范文】Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter. I’m very glad to share my plan during the Spring Festival holiday with you.
It is a good opportunity to review all the courses we learned last term to deal with the weaknesses. At the same time, online classes should be taken from our teachers so that we can catch up with the learning plan during the special period. I am ready to be a community volunteer who helps the senior in the nursing home, which I think is very meaningful. They feel lonely because of not seeing their children very often.
It will be nice if you tell me your holiday plan. Look forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文。给爱尔兰网友Bob回一封信,关于你是怎样安排春节假期的。
【详解】第一步:根据提示可知,给爱尔兰网友Bob回一封信,关于你是怎样安排春节假期的。
第二步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:the Spring Festival holiday, deal with, catch up with, a community volunteer, meaningful等。
第三步:确定文章结构,本文可以采取三段的写法,第一段主要介绍一下写信的目的和背景介绍;第二段介绍活你假期的安排;第三段想要知道对方在假期的安排。
第四步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,布局工整。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式。
省略了that的定语从句:It is a good opportunity to review all the courses we learned last term…
so that引导的目的状语从句:At the same time, online classes should be taken from our teachers so that we can catch up with the learning plan during the special period.
Who引导的定语从句:I am ready to be a community volunteer who helps the senior in the nursing home…
Which引导的非限制性定语从句与I think做插入语:…, which I think is very meaningful.
 
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