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书面表达 假如你是李华,给留在深圳过寒假的留学生朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,

英语作文范文 04-19
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假如你是李华,给留在深圳过寒假的留学生朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,告知其目前新冠病毒肺炎的形势,请他注意防护。
要点如下:1. 告知疫情现状: 疾病有可能人传人,增长地很快;病毒从武汉传到了中国的所有省份,药还没有找到;
2.提醒他假如没必要的话,尽可能地减少外出;
3.外出要戴N95口罩,避免去拥挤的地方,聚会或参加大型活动;
4.加强防疫和自我防护,譬如勤洗手,避免跟感冒或有类似流感的症状的任何人接触等。
注意:1. 字数100字左右文章的开头已给出,不计入总字数;
2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容,可以适当发挥;
参考词汇: elbow 肘部  tissues 纸巾  an N95 mask 一个N95口罩 sneeze 打喷嚏  prevention and self-protection 防疫和自我防疫 flu-like symptoms 类似流感的症状
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are in Shenzhen for the holiday these days, I’m writing to tell you the serious situation about the 2019 Novel Coronavirus. ________________________________
I’m writing sincerely to remind you to pay more attention. Wish you a pleasant and safe winter holiday in Shenzhen.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文】:
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are in Shenzhen for the holiday these days, I’m writing to tell you the serious situation about the 2019 Novel Coronavirus. Disease may be transmitted from person to person. The number of people infected is growing very fast. The virus has spread from Wuhan to all provinces of China. In order to protect your safety, you should try your best to reduce the frequency of going out. If you have to go out, you should wear an N95 mask. Don’t go to very crowded places and big parties. What’s more, you should strengthen prevention and self-protection, such as washing hands more often, avoiding contacting a person who has a cold or flu-like symptoms. Besides, you should also exercise every day and keep healthy.
I’m writing sincerely to remind you to pay more attention. Wish you a pleasant and safe winter holiday in Shenzhen.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作——电子邮件,在写作时应注意要包括提示的内容,也可以适当发挥。
2.例文点评:例文采用两段式;用第二人称叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时,条理清晰,意思连贯,叙述完整。
3.高分亮点:
短语:from… to…;in order to;try one’s best;the number of;have to do;what’s more;such as;keep healthy;every day。
语法:情态动词的被动语态;should+动词原形;if引导的条件状语从句;定语从句;祈使句的否定形式。
 
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