父母给予了我们生命，又含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大，根据以下要点，写一篇不少于80字的短文。
1、你和父母相处如何？
2、简述一次你和父母相处的经历。
3、从这次经历中，你感悟到如何和父母相处呢？
The Experience Taught Me How to Love My Parents.
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【范文】例文
The Experience Taught Me How to Love My Parents.
We should get on well with our parents. We should have more communication with them.
Our parents gave us life and brought us up. They love us very much. We should get on well with our parents.
Last Saturday night, my classmate wanted me to go to the cinema with him. It was 9 p.m. at that time. I asked my parents if I could go out to the cinema. My parents didn't agree with me. They said it was too late and it would be dangerous to come back. I was very angry and shouted "I must go" .Then I went out. On the way back, I was scared .suddenly I saw a light .It was my parents waiting for me on the side of the road, and my tears fell. I know my parents are worried about me.
How to get on well with our parents. First, we can help do more housework. Second,we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third，we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，要求以“The Experience Taught Me How to Love My Parents.”为题，父母给予了我们生命，又含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大，根据提示要点，写一篇短文，我们如何爱我们的父母。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。
2.例文点评：本文时态用到了一般现在时态和一般过去式时态，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：give us life； bring us up；get on well with；agree with ；on the side of the road；be worried about
句型：We should get on well with our parents.；I know my parents are worried about me. First，we can help do more housework；Second,we should respect them and get on well with them.
1、你和父母相处如何？
2、简述一次你和父母相处的经历。
3、从这次经历中，你感悟到如何和父母相处呢？
The Experience Taught Me How to Love My Parents.
_________________________________________________________
【范文】例文
The Experience Taught Me How to Love My Parents.
We should get on well with our parents. We should have more communication with them.
Our parents gave us life and brought us up. They love us very much. We should get on well with our parents.
Last Saturday night, my classmate wanted me to go to the cinema with him. It was 9 p.m. at that time. I asked my parents if I could go out to the cinema. My parents didn't agree with me. They said it was too late and it would be dangerous to come back. I was very angry and shouted "I must go" .Then I went out. On the way back, I was scared .suddenly I saw a light .It was my parents waiting for me on the side of the road, and my tears fell. I know my parents are worried about me.
How to get on well with our parents. First, we can help do more housework. Second,we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third，we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，要求以“The Experience Taught Me How to Love My Parents.”为题，父母给予了我们生命，又含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大，根据提示要点，写一篇短文，我们如何爱我们的父母。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。
2.例文点评：本文时态用到了一般现在时态和一般过去式时态，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：give us life； bring us up；get on well with；agree with ；on the side of the road；be worried about
句型：We should get on well with our parents.；I know my parents are worried about me. First，we can help do more housework；Second,we should respect them and get on well with them.
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