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应用文写作假定你是李华,你的好友Mike用花呗购物成瘾,购物金额常常超出其所能偿

英语作文范文 04-28
 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你的好友Mike用花呗购物成瘾,购物金额常常超出其所能偿还的能力范围,这给他的生活和学习带来了困扰。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.过度消费的危害;
2.提出合理的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:蚂蚁花顺Credit Pay
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【写作指导】
审题:人称:第一人称为主,第二人称为辅
时态:一般现在时
提纲:开头句:①明确Mike存在的问题
②表明写信的目的
文章主体:要点一:①表明对这一问题的看法
②陈述持有这种看法的理由(过度消费的危害)
要点二:①给出具体解决这一问题的方法一
②给出具体解决这一问题的方法二
结尾句:①希望建议被采纳
②表达祝愿
One possible version
Dear Mike,
Learning that recently you’ re bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.
Honestly, I totally disapprove of overspending. Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study. which should be your present focus. If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.
I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into careful consideration. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

 
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