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书面表达.假定你是李华,寒假将至,你打算邀请你的英国朋友Jim游览自己的家乡

英语作文范文 04-29
书面表达(满分15分)
假定你是李华,寒假将至,你打算邀请你的英国朋友Jim游览自己的家乡,请你写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 邀请原因;
2. 具体安排;
3. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文】Dear Jim,
   How is everything going? It’s been a long time since I last heard from you. By this letter I would like to invite you to come to my hometown for a visit in the coming winter holiday.
   It will be a great pleasure for us to have you here. During your stay here, you will be offered accommodation, which is free of charge. Besides, I will show you around some places of interest. We will try some famous local snacks and experience the local history and culture as well as our customs. I believe that you’ll surely like my hometown. I would be quite honored if you could accept my invitation.
   Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一电子邮件。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:假定你是李华,寒假将至,你打算邀请你的英国朋友Jim游览自己的家乡,请你写一封邮件。内容包括:1. 邀请原因;2. 具体安排;3. 注意事项。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:would like to invite you to come to my hometown (想邀请你来我的家乡);a great pleasure for us to have you here (我们很高兴你能来);free of charge (免费);experience the local history and culture as well as our customs (体验当地的历史文化和风俗习惯)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。It’s been a long time since I last heard from you.句中使用since引导的时间状语从句;It will be a great pleasure for us to have you here。抽象名词具体化; During your stay here, you will be offered accommodation, which is free of charge.句中which引导非限制性定语从句,并使用一般将来时态的被动语态。
 
 
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