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书面表达假如你是李华, 你的美国朋友Tom所在的纽约州新冠肺炎疫情异常严峻,

英语作文范文 05-27
书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是李华, 你的美国朋友Tom所在的纽约州新冠肺炎疫情异常严峻, 他听说我国已经在应对疫情方面取得巨大成就,积累了很多经验, 因此发邮件向你询问有关普通市民如何正确应对疫情的措施, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括:
1. 对朋友的关心的处境表示担忧和祝福;
2. 介绍我国的疫情现状和自己所在社区及居民应对疫情采取的防护措施;
3. 表明自己和朋友战胜疫情的决心!
注意:1. 词数120左右,
2. 可以适当增加细节, 使行文连贯
3. 参考词汇:healthcare workers(医护人员),pneumonia(肺炎), face masks(口罩), infect(感染),quarantine(隔离)
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
范文】Dear Tom,
I'm li hua.I heard that New York, where you live, has a very serious epidemic, and I am very worried.Now let me tell you how we are doing it.
In the beginning, the epidemic was serious in China, and we were quarantined at home.Now,with the strong support of the government and the joint efforts of thousands of medical workers and people on all fronts, the epidemic has been well controlled.But people still have to wear masks when they go out.During the outbreak, people try to avoid going out and stay at home.If you need to go out, wear a mask and avoid crowds.Do some exercise indoors, drink more and keep healthy.Only in this way can we not be infected.
In a word, we should face the reality bravely and take the right measures to believe that we will surely overcome the epidemic.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:假如你是李华, 你的美国朋友Tom所在的纽约州新冠肺炎疫情异常严峻, 他听说我国已经在应对疫情方面取得巨大成就,积累了很多经验, 因此发邮件向你询问有关普通市民如何正确应对疫情的措施, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括:1.对朋友的关心的处境表示担忧和祝福;2. 介绍我国的疫情现状和自己所在社区及居民应对疫情采取的防护措施;3. 表明自己和朋友战胜疫情的决心!
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:serious epidemic(严重疫情);quarantined at home(隔离在家);With the strong support of the government(政府大力支持);wear a mask and avoid crowds.(戴上口罩,避开人群);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I heard that New York, where you live, has a very serious epidemic句中使用宾语从句和定语从句;the joint efforts of thousands of medical workers and people on all fronts, the epidemic has been well controlled.句中使用现在完成时态的被动语态;If you need to go out, wear a mask and avoid crowds.句中使用if引导条件状语从句。
 
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