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假设你是晨光中学李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语, 请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿:

英语作文范文 03-08

   总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点)
(2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法
(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
resource; be related to; in real-time; native speaker; instance messaging; video calling; online forum; a great way; identify; wrong information; share。
第三步:连词成句
There are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.
The Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners.
I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information.
I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。范文句式复杂,如:the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.这句话既运用了现在分词做方式状语,又使用了which引导的非限定性定语从句; learning English online is really a great way for English learners.使用了动名词做主语;But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right使用了部分否定。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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