书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对你校开展的“养老院献爱心（Love Into Nursing Home）”活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你咨询相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
英语作文范文 03-08
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对你校开展的“养老院献爱心（Love Into Nursing Home）”活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你咨询相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
______________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are interested in our “Love Into Nursing Home” activity, I am glad to share some details with you.
It is universally acknowledged that respecting the old is Chinese traditional culture. To promote our tradition, we launched an activity at the nursing home last Saturday. On arriving there early in the morning, we gave them our presents and did some cleaning for the elderly. At noon, we made dumplings and cakes with them. What a day!
We all benefit a lot from the activity and hope we can participate in more instructive activities in the future. I wonder if your school organized similar charity activities as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对你校开展的“养老院献爱心（Love Into Nursing Home）”活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你咨询相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 活动内容；3. 你的感受。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be interested in (感兴趣)；Love Into Nursing Home (养老院献爱心)；share with(分享)；launch(启动)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It is universally acknowledged that respecting the old is Chinese traditional culture.运用主语从句；On arriving there early in the morning, we gave them our presents and did some cleaning for the elderly.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对你校开展的“养老院献爱心（Love Into Nursing Home）”活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你咨询相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
______________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are interested in our “Love Into Nursing Home” activity, I am glad to share some details with you.
It is universally acknowledged that respecting the old is Chinese traditional culture. To promote our tradition, we launched an activity at the nursing home last Saturday. On arriving there early in the morning, we gave them our presents and did some cleaning for the elderly. At noon, we made dumplings and cakes with them. What a day!
We all benefit a lot from the activity and hope we can participate in more instructive activities in the future. I wonder if your school organized similar charity activities as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对你校开展的“养老院献爱心（Love Into Nursing Home）”活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你咨询相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 活动内容；3. 你的感受。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be interested in (感兴趣)；Love Into Nursing Home (养老院献爱心)；share with(分享)；launch(启动)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It is universally acknowledged that respecting the old is Chinese traditional culture.运用主语从句；On arriving there early in the morning, we gave them our presents and did some cleaning for the elderly.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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